7 分范例

问题: What do people often do with a map?

思路 1

Navigation and Travel
导航和旅行
考官答案
The usual thing is to plan travel routes. Smartphones are good, but for long trips, it's better to use a paper map to see how far we're going. We can see mountains and heights, and interesting places on it too.
通常的做法是规划旅行路线。智能手机很好用,但对于长途旅行,最好使用纸质地图来了解我们要走多远。我们还可以在地图上看到山脉和高度,以及一些有趣的地方。
The most common thing to do is probably plan travel routes. It's all very well using a smartphone, but when we travel really long distances, it's better to look at a paper map so we can get an understanding of how far we are actually going to travel. Then we can see the mountains and altitudes we'll be passing through, as well as any interesting site too.
最常做的事情可能就是规划旅行路线。 使用智能手机固然很好,但当我们真的要长途旅行时,最好还是看看纸质地图,这样我们就能了解自己究竟要走多远。 这样,我们就能看到将要经过的山脉和海拔高度,以及任何有趣的景点。
语法分析
现在分词作目的状语:"using a smartphone" 使用现在分词短语作目的状语,说明使用智能手机的目的和情境,增加了句子的复杂性。 过去分词作后置定语:"travel routes" 使用过去分词"travel"作为后置定语来修饰"routes",表达了特定类型的路线。 情态动词:"it’s better to look at" 使用情态动词"better"来表达建议或偏好,说明在特定情况下纸质地图比智能手机更合适。
高分词汇
  • all very well
    固然很好
  • get an understanding
    得到了解
  • altitudes
    海拔
  • passing through
    途经

思路 2

Outdoor Activities
户外活动
考官答案
Even though digital maps are simple to use, I think people who hike or trek use paper maps. In the countryside, there might not be network or places to charge devices, so a paper map is needed for guidance. Paper maps are also easier with many landmarks like mountains and rivers.
虽然数字地图更容易使用,但我认为徒步或远足的人会使用纸质地图。在乡村地区,可能没有网络或充电地点,所以需要纸质地图来指引方向。当有许多地标,如山脉和河流时,使用纸质地图可能也更容易。
Although digital maps are easier to use, I imagine that anyone who goes hiking or trekking uses a paper map. As they are out in the country, they might not have network coverage, or anywhere to charge their devices, so they have to have a paper map to guide them. It's probably easier to use them when there are lots of landmarks like mountains and rivers too.
虽然数字地图更容易使用,但我想任何去远足或徒步旅行的人都会使用纸质地图。 因为他们在郊外,可能没有网络覆盖,也没有地方给设备充电,所以他们必须有纸质地图来指引方向。 如果有很多地标,如山脉和河流,使用纸质地图可能会更方便。
语法分析
条件状语从句:"As they are out in the country" 使用条件状语从句来设置一个特定的情境,即在乡村地区,可能面临的网络或充电问题。 动词短语:"have to have" 使用强调性的动词短语"have to have"来表达纸质地图的必要性。 比较级:"easier to use" 使用比较级来对比纸质地图和数字地图在特定情况下的使用便利性,强调在有许多地标的情况下纸质地图的优势。
高分词汇
  • digital maps
    数字地图
  • trekking
    徒步
  • network coverage
    网络覆盖
  • charge their devices
    设备充电
  • guide
    指引
  • landmarks
    地标

思路 3

Educational Purposes
教育目的
考官答案
I believe paper maps are used in schools, especially in geography classes, so students learn to read them. They're not only for directions but also show land features, like height and slope steepness. This helps students understand different countries and their geography.
我相信纸质地图在学校里,尤其是地理课上,还在使用,这样学生们就可以学习如何阅读它们。它们不仅用于指示方向,还展示了土地特征,比如高度和坡度。这有助于学生们了解不同国家及其地理结构。
I think that they are used in schools these days in geography class so students can learn how to read them. They aren’t just useful for showing where to go, but they also contain lots of information about the lay of the land, like the altitude and steepness of slopes. This helps with students’ understanding of different countries and their structure.
我认为现在学校的地理课上会使用它们,这样学生就可以学习如何阅读它们。 它们不仅有助于显示要去哪里,而且还包含有关地形的大量信息,例如斜坡的海拔和陡度。 这有助于学生了解不同国家及其结构。
语法分析
现在简单时:"are used" 使用现在简单时态,说明纸质地图在学校的使用是一种持续的现象。 动名词作主语:"learning how to read them" 使用动名词短语作主语,强调了学习阅读地图的过程,增加了句子的复杂性。 分词作定语:"the altitude and steepness of slopes" 使用分词"altitude"和"steepness"作为定语来修饰"slopes",提供了更详细的地理特征信息,增强了句子的描述性。
高分词汇
  • but also
    不仅而且
  • lay of the land
    土地特征
  • altitude
    高度
  • steepness
    坡度
  • slopes
    斜坡