7 分范例

问题: Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
Yes, there are many crosswalks where I live. They are at all the big intersections, and they make it safer for people to walk around. There are also signals to help people cross the street safely.
是的,我住的地方有很多人行横道。它们位于所有重要的交叉口,让人们走动时更加安全。还有信号灯帮助人们安全过马路。
Yes, there are quite a lot of crosswalks in my area. The city has invested in pedestrian-friendly infrastructure, with crosswalks located at every major intersection. They help ensure the safety of pedestrians in busy areas, and there are also pedestrian signals to guide people safely across the street.
是的,我所在的地区有很多人行横道。城市在行人友好的基础设施上进行了投资,每个主要交叉口都有人行横道。它们有助于确保繁忙地区行人的安全,并且还有行人信号灯引导人们安全过马路。
语法分析
1.量词的使用:“相当多的人行横道”使用了量词“相当多的”来描述人行横道的数量,表明对量词的良好理解。 2.定语从句的使用:“在每个主要交叉口都有的人行横道”使用定语从句提供有关人行横道位置的额外信息。
高分词汇
  • quite a lot of crosswalks
    很多人行横道
  • pedestrian-friendly infrastructure
    适合行人的基础设施
  • major intersection
    主要交叉口
  • safety of pedestrians
    行人安全
  • pedestrian signals
    行人信号

思路 2

No
考官答案
No, there aren't many crosswalks around here. It's more for cars, so people have to walk far to cross safely. This can be dangerous, especially for kids and older people.
不,这附近没有很多人行横道。这里更多的是为汽车服务,所以人们需要走很远才能安全过马路。这可能是危险的,特别是对孩子和老年人来说。
No, there aren't many crosswalks in my area. It's more car-oriented, with fewer facilities for pedestrians. People often have to walk a long way to find a safe crossing point, which can be dangerous, especially for children and the elderly. The local government is planning to improve pedestrian infrastructure, as many residents have raised concerns about the lack of crosswalks.
不,我所在的区域没有很多人行横道。这里更偏向于汽车出行,行人设施较少。人们常常需要走很长的路才能找到安全的过马路点,这可能很危险,尤其是对儿童和老年人来说。当地政府计划改善行人基础设施,因为许多居民对人行横道的缺乏表示关切。
语法分析
1. 使用否定形式:“不,我所在的地区没有很多人行道。”使用否定形式“没有”有效地传达了该地区缺乏人行道的情况。 2. 使用现在进行时:“当地政府正在计划改善行人基础设施”展示了使用现在进行时描述正在进行的动作或计划。
高分词汇
  • car-oriented
    以汽车为中心
  • safe crossing point
    安全通行点
  • children and the elderly
    儿童和老年人
  • pedestrian infrastructure
    行人基础设施
  • raised concerns
    提出了担忧