7 分范例

问题: What do people often do with electronic devices?

思路 1

Communication and Connectivity
沟通和连接
考官答案
These days, if you see what someone is doing on their laptop or phone, most of the time, they are using social media. They might be posting, commenting, or just scrolling. Social media has become a major source of entertainment for everyone, no matter their age. People are often watching videos of various things.
如今,如果你看到别人在笔记本或手机上做什么,大多数时候,他们在使用社交媒体。他们可能在发帖、评论或者只是浏览。社交媒体已经成为了大家的主要娱乐来源,无论老少,人们经常在观看各种视频。
Nowadays, if you look over someone’s shoulder to see what they are doing with their laptop or phone, 9 times out of 10, they will be on social media. Either they are posting or commenting or scrolling. It has become our main source of entertainment and it doesn’t matter if someone is old or young, they will be watching videos of something or other.
如今,如果你仔细观察某人正在使用笔记本电脑或手机做什么,十分之九的人会使用社交媒体。 他们要么发帖,要么评论,要么浏览。 它已经成为我们的主要娱乐来源,无论老少,他们都会观看某些视频或者其他东西。
语法分析
条件状语从句:"if you look over someone’s shoulder" 使用条件状语从句,设定了一个观察场景,引入了对社交媒体使用情况的描述。 现在分词作伴随状语:"posting or commenting or scrolling" 使用现在分词作伴随状语,列举了使用社交媒体时的常见活动,增加了句子的信息量和活跃性。 不定式:"to see what they are doing" 使用不定式来表达偷看的目的,使句子更加完整和清晰。
高分词汇
  • look over someone’s shoulder
    偷看某人的屏幕
  • posting
    发帖
  • scrolling
    浏览
  • main source
    主要来源
  • it doesn’t matter
    没关系
  • something or other
    这些或者某些

思路 2

Entertainment and Leisure
娱乐和休闲
考官答案
I think it's mainly gaming. Gaming has grown a lot, especially mobile gaming, which is now very popular. Mobile devices have improved a lot, so they can handle games with good graphics. This has caused a lot of games to be available on handheld devices. Laptops have also become almost as powerful as desktops.
我认为主要是游戏。游戏业已经发展很多,尤其是移动游戏,现在非常受欢迎。移动设备已经大大进步,可以运行画质好的游戏。这导致了许多游戏在手持设备上的普及。笔记本电脑也几乎和台式电脑一样强大了。
I think mostly gaming. Gaming has become bigger and bigger and now that mobile gaming is so big, it’s everywhere you look. Devices like mobiles have progressed so much that they can now handle games that have good graphics and this has led to an explosion of games on handheld devices. The same goes for laptops too as they are now nearly as powerful as desktops.
我认为主要是游戏。 游戏变得越来越大,现在移动游戏如此之大,无处不在。 手机等设备已经取得了很大的进步,现在可以处理具有良好图形效果的游戏,这导致手持设备上的游戏激增。 笔记本电脑也是如此,因为它们现在几乎与台式机一样强大。
语法分析
现在完成时:"has become" 和 "have progressed" 使用现在完成时,表示游戏行业的增长和移动设备的进步是从过去到现在的持续过程。 比较级:"nearly as powerful as desktops" 使用比较级来对比笔记本电脑和台式电脑的性能,强调了笔记本电脑性能的显著提升。
高分词汇
  • progressed
    进步
  • handle games
    运行游戏
  • graphics
    图形
  • explosion
    爆炸性增长
  • handheld devices
    手持设备
  • The same goes for
    同样适用于