7 分范例

问题: Do people need to have goals?

思路 1

Yes, they do
是的,需要
考官答案
Definitely. If we don't have goals, we lack direction and purpose. I believe everyone has goals, even if they don't know it. For some, it's about work, and for others, it's about family. But I think everyone has goals, whether they know it or not. We need something to aim for, or else we don't grow as individuals.
当然。如果我们没有目标,就没有方向和目的。我相信每个人都有目标,即使他们不知道。对一些人来说,这可能是工作上的,而对另一些人来说,可能是家庭方面的。但我认为每个人都有目标,无论他们是否意识到。我们需要有所追求,否则就不会作为个人成长。
Absolutely. Without goals, we don’t really have a direction or purpose. I think everyone sets themselves goals whether they realize it or not. For some, it may be at work, while for others it may be for family but I think everyone sets them, consciously or not. We need something to work towards, otherwise we aren’t growing as a person.
绝对的。 没有目标,我们就没有真正的方向或目的。 我认为每个人都会为自己设定目标,无论他们是否意识到。 对于某些人来说,可能是在工作中,而对于其他人来说,可能是为了家庭,但我认为每个人都有意识或无意识地设定它们。 我们需要为之努力,否则我们就无法成长为一个人。
语法分析
条件句: "Without goals, we don’t really have a direction or purpose." 这个条件句表达了没有目标时的后果,增加了语句的逻辑性和复杂度。 一般现在时: "everyone sets themselves goals" 这个表达使用了一般现在时态,说明设定目标是一个普遍且持续的行为,突出了语句的普遍性和时效性。 被动语态: "we aren’t growing as a person" 以被动语态来表达个人成长的缺失,强调了成长的重要性,而不是谁使成长发生,显示了句子结构的复杂性和语言的准确性。
高分词汇
  • goals
    目标
  • direction
    方向
  • purpose
    目的
  • set themselves goals
    给他们自己设定目标
  • realize
    意识到
  • consciously or not
    有意识或无意识地

思路 2

No, not necessarily
不,不一定
考官答案
No, I believe goals can distract us and create too much pressure. Life is so fast now that our goals might prevent us from noticing opportunities right in front of us. We focus too much on them. We should be more flexible and open to chances that come, so we can be spontaneous and respond to things happening around us.
不,我认为目标会分散我们的注意力并造成不必要的压力。现在的生活节奏如此之快,我们为自己设定的目标可能会让我们忽略眼前的机会。我们过于专注于这些目标。我们应该更灵活、更开放地迎接遇到的机会,这样我们才能随机应变,对周围发生的事情做出反应。
No, I think goals distract people and put them under unnecessary pressure. Life moves so fast these days that the goals we set for ourselves can stop us from seeing opportunities in front of us, as that’s all we focus on. We need to be open to opportunities that come our way in a more flexible way so that we can be spontaneous and react to what happens around us.
不,我认为目标会分散人们的注意力,并使他们承受不必要的压力。 如今,生活节奏如此之快,以至于我们为自己设定的目标可能会阻止我们看到面前的机会,因为这就是我们所关注的一切。 我们需要以更灵活的方式对出现的机会持开放态度,以便我们能够自发地对周围发生的事情做出反应。
语法分析
条件句: "that the goals we set for ourselves can stop us" 这个条件句说明了设定目标可能带来的负面影响,增加了句子的逻辑性和复杂度。 现在进行时: "Life moves so fast" 使用现在进行时态强调了生活的快速变化,体现了语言的时效性和活跃性。 被动语态: "be open to opportunities" 这个表达用被动语态,强调对机会的接受态度,而不是谁在创造这些机会,展示了句子结构的复杂性。
高分词汇
  • distract
    分散注意力
  • under unnecessary pressure
    处于不必要的压力中
  • set for
    设定
  • opportunities
    机会
  • focus
    注意
  • flexible
    灵活的
  • spontaneous
    随机应变
  • react
    反应