7 分范例

问题: What can you do with a laptop?

思路 1

Educational Purposes
教育用途
考官答案
These days, I use my laptop for everything, especially for online courses I've started. I'm doing a computer programming course. It's self-paced, so I study when I can. There are also live webinars that are quite interesting. My laptop is more important to me now, as it's my main way to learn online.
最近,我用我的笔记本电脑做所有事情,尤其是我开始的在线课程。我正在学习计算机编程课程。这个课程是自学的,所以我有时间就学。还有一些很有趣的现场网络研讨会。现在我的笔记本电脑对我来说更重要了,因为它是我在线学习的主要方式。
Nowadays, I use my laptop for everything but something I’ve started doing recently is online courses. I joined a computer programming course and it’s self-access so I do it when I have the time, but there are also webinars that I can attend and they are really interesting. My laptop has become increasingly important to me as it’s like a gateway to learning online now.
如今,我用笔记本电脑做所有事情,但我最近开始做的事情是在线课程。 我参加了计算机编程课程,它是自学课程,所以我有时间就参加,但我也可以参加一些网络研讨会,它们真的很有趣。 我的笔记本电脑对我来说变得越来越重要,因为它现在就像在线学习的门户。
语法分析
现在进行时: "something I’ve started doing recently" 使用现在进行时表示最近开始进行的活动,表明这是一个持续发生的动作。 现在完成时: "I’ve started" 这个表达使用了现在完成时,说明动作从过去开始并持续到现在。 形容词短语: "self-access" 这个形容词短语作为课程的定语,表达了课程的特点,增强了语言的描述性和准确性。 比较级: "increasingly important" 使用比较级形式表达电脑的重要性随时间增长,显示了口语表达的复杂性。
高分词汇
  • programming course
    编程课程
  • self-access
    自学的
  • webinars
    网络研讨会
  • laptop
    笔记本电脑
  • a gateway
    通道

思路 2

Work-Related Activities
工作相关活动
考官答案
I think many people are like me because I use my laptop for work. Everything I do is on my laptop. I have virtual meetings with my team almost every day and we often have teleconferences with customers from different countries, so now, I can’t do much if I don’t have my laptop with me, and I always take it wherever I go.
我觉得很多人和我一样,因为我用我的笔记本电脑工作。我做的所有事情都在笔记本上。我几乎每天都要和我的团队进行虚拟会议,我们也经常和不同国家的客户进行电话会议,所以现在如果没有我的笔记本电脑,我就做不了什么,我总是把它带在身边。
I imagine a lot of people are in the same boat as me as I use my laptop for work, as in everything I do now is on my laptop. I join virtual meetings nearly every day with my team and we have teleconferences with customers in different countries pretty regularly, so I’ve got to the point where I can’t do much without my laptop with me, and I take it everywhere.
我想很多人都和我一样,因为我使用笔记本电脑工作,因为我现在所做的一切都是在笔记本电脑上进行的。 我几乎每天都与我的团队参加虚拟会议,并且我们经常与不同国家的客户举行电话会议,所以我已经到了没有笔记本电脑就无法做很多事情的地步,而且我到处都带着它
语法分析
现在完成时:"I’ve got to the point" 使用现在完成时,表明说话者对笔记本电脑依赖的情况是一个逐渐发展的过程。 现在简单时和现在进行时:"I use my laptop for work" 和 "I join virtual meetings" 的使用展示了说话者日常的常规活动,同时体现了句子结构的多样性。 宾语从句:"that I can't do much without my laptop" 使用宾语从句,增加了句子的复杂性,同时说明了笔记本电脑对说话者工作的重要性。
高分词汇
  • in the same boat
    同舟共济
  • virtual meetings
    虚拟会议
  • teleconferences
    电话会议
  • pretty regularly
    经常