7 分范例

问题: What equipment do you find difficult to use?

思路 1

Technical Devices
技术设备
考官答案
I'm pretty good with technology, but programming software is hard for me to understand. I've taken some online courses as introductions, and I've tried hard to become functional at it. However, I can't seem to make it work. Every time I think I've made progress, whatever I program just doesn't work, and I don't know how to fix it.
我在技术方面还算在行,但对编程软件的理解却有些困难。我参加了一些线上课程作为入门,也努力尝试去掌握它。但似乎我总是做不到。每当我认为我有所进步时,我编写的程序就是不起作用,而且我不知道如何解决。
I’m quite tech-savvy but I can’t get my head round programming software. I’ve done a couple of online courses as introductions to it and have tried and tried to get to a point where I’m functional, but I just don’t seem to be able to get there. Every time I think I’ve got somewhere, whatever I’m programming just doesn’t work and I don’t know how to fix it.
我对技术很精通,但我无法理解编程软件。 我已经完成了一些在线课程作为对其的介绍,并尝试并尝试达到我可以发挥作用的程度,但我似乎无法到达那里。 每当我以为我已经到达某个地方时,无论我正在编程什么,就是不起作用,而且我不知道如何修复它。
语法分析
现在完成时: "I’ve done a couple of online courses" 使用现在完成时来表达过去经历对当前情况的影响,展示了对时间关系的清晰理解。 情态动词: "I just don’t seem to be able to get there" 使用情态动词“seem”表达不确定性,体现了句子的复杂性和口语的自然流畅性。 条件状语从句: "Every time I think I’ve got somewhere" 使用条件状语从句来表达每次发生某事时的情况,增加了语句的复杂度和连贯性。
高分词汇
  • tech-savvy
    精通技术的
  • get my head round
    理解,弄懂
  • programming software
    编程软件
  • functional
    功能性的

思路 2

Household Appliances
家用电器
考官答案
For me, it's the washing machine. It's really confusing. It has lots of modes for different types of clothes and how dirty they are, but I always use the same one. I looked at the instructions, but they didn't help much. I'm not sure if I should use a high or low temperature.
对我来说,就是洗衣机。它真的很让人困惑。它有很多模式,适用于不同类型的衣服和脏污程度,但我总是使用同一个模式。我看过说明书,但那并没有太大帮助。我不确定应该使用高温还是低温。
Quite simply, the washing machine. It baffles me. It has multiple modes for different fabrics and times, and also settings for how dirty the clothes are, but I find myself using the same setting every single time. I tried reading the instructions that came with it but it didn’t make things any clearer and I have no idea whether to use a high temperature or low one.
简单来说,就是洗衣机。 这让我很困惑。 它有针对不同面料和时间的多种模式,还有衣服有多脏的设置,但我发现自己每次都使用相同的设置。 我尝试阅读附带的说明,但它并没有让事情变得更清楚,我不知道是否使用高温或低温。
语法分析
复合宾语: "I find myself using the same setting every single time." 这个句子使用了复合宾语结构(find + oneself + v-ing),展示了较高级的语法运用能力。 条件句: "I have no idea whether to use a high temperature or low one." 这是一个条件句型,展示了答案中的复杂性和变化,增加了口语的丰富性。
高分词汇
  • quite simply
    简单来说
  • baffles
    使困惑
  • multiple modes
    多种模式
  • fabrics
    面料
  • didn’t make things any clearer
    并没有让事情变得更清楚