7 分范例

问题: Why do some people dislike teamwork?

思路 1

Individuality
个性
考官答案
I believe it's because individuals like to work alone. Perhaps they think they can do the task better than others and don't trust their colleagues with it. As a result, they often have more work and probably more stress than their teammates.
我认为这是因为人们更喜欢单独工作。他们可能认为自己比别人做得更好,不信任同事完成任务。因此,他们通常比团队其他成员有更多的工作,可能压力也更大。
I think it's because people prefer to go it alone. Maybe they believe that they can do the job better than their colleagues and don't trust them to complete whatever task they have to do. This means that they end up with far more work to do than the rest of the team, and probably a lot more stress too.
我认为这是因为人们喜欢单打独斗。 也许他们认为自己能比同事做得更好,不相信他们能完成任何任务。 这意味着,他们最终要做的工作比团队其他成员多得多,压力也可能大得多。
语法分析
条件句:"Maybe they believe that they can do the job better" 使用了条件句,表达了一种可能性,展现了答案的复杂性和逻辑性。 现在简单时:"they end up with far more work" 使用现在简单时态表达了一种常规的、持续发生的情况,反映了语言的准确性。 比较级:"better than their colleagues" 和 "more work" 使用比较级形式,增加了答案的细节和深度,体现了较高的语言能力。
高分词汇
  • go it alone
    单干
  • colleagues
    同事们
  • end up
    结束

思路 2

Efficiency
效率
考官答案
Some people think team work is not efficient. They believe that teams often need a lot of meetings to plan work and making decisions can take a long time. This can take up a lot of time and some feel it's better to use this time to actually do the work. That's why they prefer to work alone instead of in a team.
有些人认为团队合作不高效。他们认为团队经常需要开很多会来计划工作,而且做决策可能会花很长时间。这会占用很多时间,有些人觉得最好把这些时间用来真正地去做工作。这就是为什么他们宁愿单独工作,而不是在团队中工作。
Some see working in a team as inefficient. By this, I mean that teams need to meet regularly to discuss plans for a job and decision making can sometimes take quite a while. These can be time-consuming and some people feel that this time could have been better spent just getting on with the job. That’s why some people just prefer to avoid working in a team.
有些人认为团队工作效率低下。 我的意思是,团队需要定期开会讨论工作计划,决策有时可能需要很长时间。 这些都很耗费时间,有些人觉得把这些时间花在工作上会更好。 这就是为什么有些人宁愿避免在团队中工作。
语法分析
现在分词短语作主语补足语:"teams need to meet regularly to discuss plans" 中的 "to discuss plans" 是现在分词短语作用于 "meet",增强了句子的连贯性和逻辑性。 条件句:"some people feel that this time could have been better spent" 使用条件句型,展现了假设和推断,增加了答案的深度。 比较级:"better spent just getting on with the job" 中的 "better" 使用比较级,表达了效率的对比,增加了答案的复杂性。
高分词汇
  • inefficient
    效率低
  • decision making
    决策
  • take quite a while
    费时费力
  • time-consuming
    耗时
  • getting on with
    继续