7 分范例
话题: Describe a time when someonedid quite well in a team (e.g. schoolwork or a community)
范例
Today, I'd like to share about an enthusiastic teammate I met during a volunteer activity. He was a college classmate majoring in environmental studies, and what struck me most was his passion for community service. We worked together in a tree-planting drive. It was an initiative to green our campus and engage students in environmental conservation. He played a pivotal role in our team. Not only did he effectively delegate tasks to each of us, ensuring that everyone was involved and contributing, but he also maintained a cheerful and positive attitude throughout the event. This kept our spirits high even when the work got tough. What made him a great team member was his ability to inspire others. His enthusiasm was infectious, and he would often share interesting facts about the environment as we worked, making the experience educational as well as enjoyable. He also demonstrated strong leadership and responsibility, always being the first to arrive and the last to leave, making sure everything was done correctly and safely. ​ I learned a lot from this teammate, and their passion for community service was contagious. It was an enriching experience that not only contributed to a good cause but also brought our class closer together.
今天,我想分享一下我在一次志愿活动中遇到的一位热情的队友。他是我的大学同学,主修环境学,他对社区服务的热情给我留下了深刻的印象。 我们一起参加了植树活动。这是一个绿化校园并让学生参与环境保护的倡议。他在我们团队中扮演了关键角色。他不仅有效地将任务分配给我们每个人,确保每个人都参与并做出贡献,而且在整个活动中都保持着愉快和积极的态度。即使工作变得艰难,这也保持了我们的士气。 使他成为优秀团队成员的是他激励他人的能力。他的热情具有感染力,他在我们工作时经常分享有关环境的有趣事实,使这次经历既有教育意义又令人愉快。他还展现了强烈的领导力和责任感,总是第一个到达,最后一个离开,确保一切都正确、安全地完成。 我从这位队友那里学到了很多,他们对社区服务的热情具有感染力。这是一次丰富的经历,不仅为一个好的事业做出了贡献,也让我们班级的同学更加团结。
高分词汇
  • enthusiastic
    热情的
  • volunteer activity
    志愿活动
  • environmental studies
    环境学
  • passion
    激情
  • community service
    社区服务
  • tree
    planting drive
  • initiative
    主动性
  • engage
    参与
  • conservation
    保护
  • pivotal role
    关键角色
  • effectively delegate
    有效分配
  • cheerful and positive attitude
    欢快和积极的态度
  • inspire
    激励