7 分范例

问题: What do you think of in-car GPS navigation systems?

思路 1

Positive View
积极观点
考官答案
They are a great resource. You can use them to find your way and receive traffic updates, helping you reach your destination faster. The latest models have voice activation, making them really easy to use. Even people who don’t like technology can use them easily.
它们是很好的资源。你可以用它们来找路,并获取交通更新信息,这有助于你更快地到达目的地。最新的型号支持语音激活,这使它们非常容易使用。即使是不喜欢科技的人也可以轻松使用它们。
They are an excellent resource. People can navigate in real-time and get traffic updates so they can get to their destination in the quickest time possible. The new ones out today are voice activated so they are incredibly easy to use, and even the most tech averse person can operate them without any problems.
他们是非常好的资源。人们可以实时导航并获取路况的最新状况更新,以便他们能够以最快的速度到达目的地。今天推出的新产品是语音激活的,因此使用起来非常简单,即使是最厌恶技术的人也可以毫无问题地操作它们。
语法分析
形容词短语:"excellent resource" 和 "incredibly easy" 使用形容词短语,增强了描述的准确性和细节丰富度。 被动语态:"are voice activated" 使用被动语态,突出了这些设备的特性而不是使用者,增加了句子的复杂性。
高分词汇
  • excellent resource
    优秀资源
  • navigate in real-time
    实时导航
  • traffic updates
    交通更新
  • quickest time
    最快时间
  • voice activated
    语音激活
  • incredibly easy
    非常容易
  • tech averse
    对技术抗拒的

思路 2

Negative View
消极观点
考官答案
They are somewhat useful, but I believe they are more of a distraction. Anything that makes us look away from the road, even just for a moment, is risky for both drivers and pedestrians. These devices often have technical issues, and drivers might need to re-enter their destination, even while driving. So, I don’t think they really help drivers.
它们在某种程度上有用,但我认为它们更多是一种干扰。任何让我们从道路上移开视线的事物,哪怕只是一瞬间,对司机和行人来说都是危险的。这些设备经常出现技术问题,司机可能需要在开车时重新输入目的地。所以,我认为它们并没有真正帮助司机。
Although they are useful to an extent, I think that they are an unnecessary distraction. Anything that takes our eyes off the road, even for a split second, is a danger to drivers and pedestrians. They are prone to technical malfunctions and so the driver has to input the destination again, sometimes while they are actually driving, so for me, they don't aid drivers.
尽管它们在一定程度上很有用,但我认为它们是不必要的干扰。任何让我们的视线离开道路的东西,即使是一瞬间,对司机和行人来说都是危险的。它们很容易出现技术故障,因此驾驶员必须再次输入目的地,有时是在实际驾驶时,所以对我来说,它们不会帮助驾驶员。
语法分析
让步状语从句:"Although they are useful to an extent" 使用了让步状语从句,展现了能够平衡对比和批判性思考的能力。 分词结构:"taking our eyes off the road" 使用了分词结构作为主语,增加了语句的复杂性和表达的准确性。 被动语态:"are prone to" 使用了被动语态,强调了设备的固有特性,而非人为因素,体现了复杂的语法结构。
高分词汇
  • unnecessary distraction
    不必要的干扰
  • split second
    瞬间
  • pedestrians
    行人
  • prone to
    倾向于
  • technical malfunctions
    技术故障
  • input
    输入
  • aid
    帮助