购物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答要更简洁并注意语法和单复数，开头用主题句直接回答，然后用一两句具体细节支持。避免重复（如“big shopping”可改为“go on a big shopping trip”），注意介词和冠词（e.g. “with my family”，而不是“families”），以及时态一致。

示例: Yes, I enjoy shopping. After exams I often go on a shopping trip with my family to buy snacks and fresh vegetables, which helps me relax after the stress of finals.

建议: 回答要更清晰、有逻辑并修正口语错误。先给出直接肯定句，然后用一两句具体理由支持，避免含糊表达（如“little distinction”要改为“small difference”）。注意发音停顿不要重复词（如“comp if”）。

示例: Yes, I always compare prices because even a small difference can add up to big savings. By choosing cheaper options I can afford more items I want without wasting money.

建议: 回答要更自然并改正语法问题。使用主题句直接回答，然后说明准备方法。不要使用错误短语（如“list A to do list”或“check it whether I bought”）。用更地道的表达描述购物前的计划。

示例: No, it's not difficult because I usually make a shopping list beforehand and plan exactly which stores to visit. I also check the list before I leave to make sure I don't forget anything.

建议: 回答要避免情绪化或不自然的表达（如“black hearted businessmen”），并用更客观的理由支持观点。说明何时会选择贵的或便宜的商品，提供具体判断标准（如质量、品牌、保修）。同时注意语法（例如“sells”应为“sell”，“the lower prices one”应为“the cheaper one”）。

示例: No, I don't think expensive goods are always better. I usually judge by quality, brand reputation and warranty; if a cheaper item has good reviews and a guarantee, I'll choose it over a costly alternative.

× After exams, I often have a big shopping with my families.

✓ After exams, I often go on a big shopping trip with my family.

句子中“a big shopping”用法不正确，英语中应使用短语“a shopping trip”或动词短语“go shopping”。另外“my families”错误复数，family作为整体通常用单数或用families仅在指多个不同家庭时使用。建议使用“my family”或说“I often go shopping with my family”来表达更自然的英语。

× We often go to the supermarket to buy some snacks and vegetables we would like to eat and at the same time it can make me feel relaxed after the final exam.

✓ We often go to the supermarket to buy snacks and vegetables we would like to eat, and at the same time it helps me relax after the final exams.

原句中“some snacks and vegetables we would like to eat”可以保留，但“it can make me feel relaxed after the final exam”用词和冠词不太自然。将“it can make me feel relaxed”改为更自然的“it helps me relax”。此外“final exam”若指一段时间的多门考试，改为复数“final exams”。建议使用简单直接的表达使语气更地道。

× Definitely, although it has little distinction in these two prices, it will save a lot of money if we comp if we choose the cheaper one.

✓ Definitely. Although there is little difference between the two prices, it will save a lot of money if we choose the cheaper one.

原句有多处问题： 1) “it has little distinction in these two prices”结构不正确，应为“there is little difference between the two prices”（存在……之间差别）。这涉及到存在句和比较表达，用法不符合[There be issue]和[Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs]，但主要修正为正确表达。 2) “comp if we”为打字或重复错误，删除多余部分。建议使用“difference between”来比较两者。整体上用简洁句子更清晰。

× And after saving we can buy a lot of things we like instead of wasting them.

✓ And after saving, we can buy a lot of things we like instead of wasting the money.

句中“wasting them”指代不明确，原句中“them”逻辑上应指钱（money），但“things”也可能被误解为“它们”。应明确写为“wasting the money”或“wasting it”。建议在代词使用时确保指代对象明确。

× No it isn't because I always have a clear target before I go shopping like the supermarket and I also list A to do list before.

✓ No, it isn't, because I always have a clear target before I go shopping, such as the supermarket, and I also make a to-do list beforehand.

原句结构混乱： 1) “like the supermarket”用法不当，应使用“such as”或改写为“for example, the supermarket”。 2) “I also list A to do list before”不符合英语构造，正确说法是“I also make a to-do list beforehand”。建议注意动词搭配（make a list）和固定短语（to-do list, beforehand）。

× Before I go to these places I also check it whether I bought all things I need.

✓ Before I go to these places, I also check whether I have bought all the things I need.

原句中“check it whether I bought”语序错误且时态不合适。应使用“check whether”引导从句，且在去之前应用现在完成时“have bought”表示至今是否已买到所需物品。建议使用“check whether I have bought all the things I need”。

× No, I don't think so, because nowadays there are a lot of black hearted businessmen who sells items with different prices but the same product, the same product.

✓ No, I don't think so, because nowadays there are a lot of unscrupulous businessmen who sell the same product at different prices.

“black hearted”为中文直译并不地道，建议用“unscrupulous”或“dishonest”。“who sells”主谓不一致，应为“who sell”因为先行词“businessmen”为复数。此外“items with different prices but the same product, the same product”重复且语序不当，改为“sell the same product at different prices”。建议使用更地道的形容词并注意主谓一致。

× I always choose the lower prices one to make sure I owned it.

✓ I always choose the cheaper one to make sure I own it.

“the lower prices one”中“prices”不应为复数，也不应使用“lower prices”修饰“one”；正确短语为“the cheaper one”。另外“to make sure I owned it”时态错误，表达现在习惯应使用一般现在时“own”。建议使用“cheaper”作比较级并保持时态一致。