礼物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Keep your answer concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with correct verb forms and vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases like 'specials person' and 'can taken away from them.' Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

示例: Yes, I enjoy giving gifts to my friends and family. I do this because I like to show appreciation and make people feel special, especially on important occasions.

建议: Provide a grammatically correct topic sentence and add a brief specific example. Use correct tense and articles (e.g., 'a birthday'). Use a linking phrase like 'for example' to add detail.

示例: I usually give gifts on special occasions such as birthdays, Christmas, and Thanksgiving. For example, I always buy small presents for close friends on their birthdays.

建议: Clarify your main idea and use correct vocabulary. Start with a topic sentence: say what you consider first, then give a specific reason and an example. Use linking words like 'first' and 'for example.'

示例: The main thing I consider is whether the gift will remind the person of something they like. For example, if they love cooking I might choose a special cookbook or a nice kitchen tool.

建议: Answer directly and cleanly. Use correct phrasing such as 'handmade' and avoid repetition. Add one brief reason or alternative to enrich the response.

示例: Not yet — I'm not very good at crafts, so I usually buy gifts instead. However, I sometimes write a personal card to make the present more meaningful.

建议: Make your opinion clear and support it with a concise reason and example. Correct unclear phrases like 'taught me.' Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to show the reason.

示例: I don't think expensive gifts are necessary because thoughtful presents show more care. For instance, a handmade card or a meaningful souvenir often means more to me than an expensive item.

× Yes, I'm a person that loves giving gifts to my friends, my family and to my specials person because I believe that gifts is something that can taken away from them.

✓ Yes, I'm a person who loves giving gifts to my friends, my family and to my special person because I believe that gifts are something that can be taken from them.

Multiple issues: 'that' used for people is better as 'who' (Grammar problem type 26 sentence structure but listed as definite/article choice here). 'specials person' is incorrect; use 'special person' (adjective form). 'gifts is' should be 'gifts are' (plural agreement, Grammar problem type 1/27). 'can taken away' needs passive auxiliary 'be' as 'can be taken' (past participle use, Grammar problem type 9). Suggestions: use 'who' for people, ensure adjective forms match nouns ('special person'), maintain subject-verb agreement for plurals, and include auxiliary verbs for passive constructions.

× I usually give gifts to others when had a special celebration like birthday, Christmas, and Thanksgiving.

✓ I usually give gifts to others when there is a special celebration like a birthday, Christmas, or Thanksgiving.

Original omits subject/verb and article: 'when had a special celebration' is ungrammatical; use 'when there is a special celebration' (there be issue, type 3) or 'when I have a special celebration'. Also 'birthday' needs an article 'a birthday' and list items join with 'or' or commas. Suggestion: include a clear subject and correct articles for countable nouns.

× One if I consider when I am choosing a brief is that give is reminds of him or her.

✓ One thing I consider when I am choosing a gift is that it reminds him or her of me.

Many structural errors: 'One if' should be 'One thing'; 'brief' is wrong word, use 'gift'; 'give is reminds of him or her' is ungrammatical—use 'it reminds him or her of me' or 'it reminds me of them' depending on meaning. Also maintain subject-verb agreement and correct pronoun order. Suggestion: plan sentence as 'One thing I consider ... is that it reminds them of me.'

× Umm not yet because I'm bad at doing a hand handmade gift so I don't give gifts that I handmade.

✓ Not yet, because I'm not good at making handmade gifts, so I don't give gifts that I make myself.

Problems: 'bad at doing a hand handmade gift' mixes words; use 'not good at making handmade gifts'. 'I handmade' is incorrect—use 'I make myself' or 'I made'. Also use commas for clarity. Suggestion: use 'make' with 'handmade gifts' and reflexive 'myself' if emphasising the maker.

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

This question is grammatically acceptable as written; subject-verb agreement is correct ('do' with plural 'gifts'). No correction needed. Explanation: The auxiliary 'do' supports the plural subject; the sentence is fine.

× I don't think so. Maybe when I receive gifts for me, umm, I don't mind if it's expensive or not as long as they taught me. They taught me and they give me a gift.

✓ I don't think so. When I receive gifts, I don't mind if they're expensive or not as long as they thought of me and gave me a gift.

Multiple issues: 'receive gifts for me' should be 'receive gifts' or 'receive gifts meant for me'. 'it's expensive' should agree in number with 'gifts' so use 'they're expensive'. 'they taught me' is wrong word; intended 'they thought of me' or 'they considered me'. Also tense inconsistency: 'They taught me and they give me a gift' should be past/present consistent: 'they thought of me and gave me a gift' or present 'they think of me and give me a gift.' Suggestion: use 'thought of me' for the idea and match verb number and tense.