礼物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., 'gifts' not 'gives'), and avoid redundancy. Give one brief reason and one short example to support your point. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

示例: I'm not very good at choosing gifts. Because I often don't know what people want, I usually avoid buying presents and tend to receive more gifts than I give.

建议: Good clear answer but tighten language and correct small errors. Start with a direct topic sentence, then briefly explain why using linking words like 'because' and an example. Use plural 'anniversaries' or 'an anniversary' and 'cherishing a friendship' phrasing.

示例: I usually give gifts on special occasions, such as birthdays and anniversaries, because forgetting these days can seem thoughtless. For instance, I always send a small gift to my close friends on their birthdays.

建议: Avoid filler words and correct grammar (e.g., 'consider what the person likes'). Make your answer more specific by naming types of preferences or needs and use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore'.

示例: I consider what the person likes and what would be useful to them. For example, if a friend loves cooking I might choose a useful kitchen gadget so the gift will be appreciated.

建议: Be concise and fix grammar and word choice. State clearly whether you have and then give a brief reason and result. Use linking words like 'but' and 'so' to show contrast and consequence.

示例: I have tried making handmade gifts, but they didn't turn out well, so I ended up buying a store-bought present instead.

建议: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Use clear contrast words like 'sometimes' and 'however' and give a specific example to support your opinion. Keep it to two or three sentences.

示例: Sometimes expensive gifts can show strong feelings, but not always. However, a thoughtful small gift, like a handwritten letter, often expresses emotions more meaningfully.

× Well definitely I'm not good at giving gives.

✓ Well, definitely I'm not good at giving gifts.

The student used 'gives' incorrectly; the correct noun is 'gift' in plural 'gifts' when talking generally. Use 'giving gifts' to express the activity. Also add a comma after 'Well' for natural speech punctuation. (Grammar type ID: 1)

× Like I'm not a really considerable person and I don't know what the others wanted, so I won't buy presents for them.

✓ I'm not a very thoughtful/considerate person and I don't know what others want, so I don't buy presents for them.

'Really considerable' is not natural; use 'very thoughtful' or 'considerate'. 'The others' is unnecessary; use 'others'. Tense/verb form: 'wanted' should be present 'want' because it's a general statement. Also 'won't buy' suggests future refusal; 'don't buy' fits habitual action. (Grammar type IDs: 13, 12, 6)

× Rather than that, I guess I receive gifts more than giving it out.

✓ Rather than that, I guess I receive gifts more than I give them out.

Mixing forms: 'giving it out' is incorrect because 'gifts' is plural so pronoun should be 'them', and the clause needs a subject 'I' before 'give'. Use parallel structure 'receive... more than I give'. (Grammar type ID: 27)

× Well, for me, I really give gifts on special days, for example, like birthdays or anniversary, 'cause these days if you said that you forgot, it will be kind of embarrassing and your friends will think that you're not cherishing this friendship.

✓ For me, I usually give gifts on special days, for example birthdays or anniversaries, because if you say you forgot it will be embarrassing and your friends will think you do not value the friendship.

Use 'usually' for habitual action. 'Anniversary' should be plural 'anniversaries' as a general category. 'If you said that you forgot' should be present 'if you say you forgot'. 'Cherishing this friendship' is awkward; use 'value the friendship'. Also replace informal 'cause' with 'because' and avoid contractions in formal correction. (Grammar type IDs: 6, 1, 6, 13)

× Well, I consider about what the person like and what will benefit them 'cause if you give them something that they don't like, then it's not really necessary, you can just not give them instead.

✓ I consider what the person likes and what will benefit them, because if you give them something they do not like, it is unnecessary; you can simply choose not to give it.

Do not use 'consider about'; 'consider' takes a direct object. Subject-verb agreement: 'person like' should be 'person likes'. 'Not really necessary' is vague; 'unnecessary' is better. Replace 'can just not give them' with 'choose not to give it' to match singular/plural referents. (Grammar type IDs: 11, 27, 13)

× Well I tried to give out handmade gifts but I don't think I made them really well so it end up to fail as long as I have to buy another give to give to them.

✓ I once tried to give handmade gifts, but I don't think I made them very well, so they ended up failing and I had to buy another gift for them.

Mixed tenses and incorrect verb forms: 'it end up to fail' should be past 'they ended up failing'. 'Another give' is wrong; use 'another gift'. Use consistent past tense for the completed attempt and past result ('had to buy'). Also 'give out' can be simplified to 'give'. (Grammar type IDs: 5, 9, 1)

× Well, I guess sometime is, but not all the time 'cause sometimes the emotion is more valuable than expensive gifts, so even though sometimes a small present means a lot.

✓ Well, I guess sometimes they do, but not always, because emotions can be more valuable than expensive gifts; sometimes a small present means a lot.

'Sometime is' is incorrect; use 'sometimes they do' to refer to gifts. Use 'not always' instead of 'not all the time' for natural phrasing. Place adverb 'sometimes' appropriately. 'The emotion is more valuable' should be plural or general 'emotions can be more valuable'. Ensure clear subject reference for 'they'. (Grammar type IDs: 4, 20, 13)