礼物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting example. Avoid redundancy and fix tense/number errors (e.g., "the majority of people I give gifts to"). Use a linking word if adding an example.

示例: Yes, I am good at giving gifts. For example, last year I chose a handmade cookbook for my sister based on her love of cooking, and she told me she uses it every week.

建议: Good structure and content—one small improvement is to make the list smoother and correct small collocations (say "Christmas" rather than "Christmas party" unless specific). Use a linking word to connect the two sentences for coherence.

示例: I usually give gifts on special occasions, such as birthdays, weddings and Christmas. I do this because I want to celebrate important events and show appreciation for people I care about.

建议: Correct grammar and be more specific. Start with a topic sentence, then give one concrete criterion and an example. Fix tense and pronoun issues ("I don't want my gift to be wasted"). Use a linking phrase like "for example" to add clarity.

示例: I consider whether the recipient will like and actually use the gift. For example, for my friend who loves gardening I buy tools or seeds so the present won't be wasted.

建议: Make the answer more natural and concise. Use a clear topic sentence and a brief reason or future intention. Correct pronoun errors ("give someone a present").

示例: Not yet, but I plan to. Maybe next year I will make a photo album for my mother because she loves family memories.

建议: Improve grammar and clarity. State your opinion clearly, then support it with one specific reason and an example. Use linking words like "because" and correct verb forms ("express feelings better than").

示例: No. I think thoughtful gifts express feelings better than expensive ones because they show you know the person's tastes; for instance, a handwritten letter with a small handmade item meant more to my friend than an expensive watch.

× I'd say I'm good at giving gifts because majority of the people that I gave gifts, they say that they like what I gave to them and they will use it carefully.

✓ I'd say I'm good at giving gifts because the majority of the people to whom I gave gifts say that they like what I gave them and will use it carefully.

Use 'the majority' with 'the' when referring to a specific group; 'people that I gave gifts' is incorrect—use 'people to whom I gave gifts' or 'people I gave gifts to'. Remove the redundant pronoun 'they' after the clause. Use consistent tense: simple past 'gave' and reporting 'say' can remain present for general truth, but better to keep 'say' as present simple if still true. Use 'gave them' instead of 'gave to them' for natural phrasing.

× I usually give gifts on special occasions such as birthdays, weddings, Christmas party.

✓ I usually give gifts on special occasions such as birthdays, weddings, and Christmas parties.

List items need parallel and countable nouns. 'Christmas party' should be plural 'Christmas parties' to match recurring occasions and include 'and' before final item. This fixes structure and ensures correct plural usage.

× I love to give presents to celebrate important events and to show appreciation of the people I care about.

✓ I love to give presents to celebrate important events and to show appreciation for the people I care about.

Use 'appreciation for' rather than 'appreciation of' when expressing gratitude toward people. 'Appreciation of' can mean recognition of value, but collocation 'appreciation for someone' is more natural.

× When choosing a gift I usually consider if they will like it and they will use it because I don't wanted my gift to be tossed away because they will not need it.

✓ When choosing a gift, I usually consider whether they will like it and use it, because I don't want my gift to be tossed away if they do not need it.

'Want' should be present form 'want' not past 'wanted' because speaker describes current preference. Use 'whether' instead of 'if' for clarity in choices. Remove redundant 'they' and combine verbs: 'will like it and use it'. Use 'if they do not need it' (or 'if they won't need it') for conditional clarity.

× As of the moment, not yet. I haven't made something to give us a present, but maybe in the future if there's a time to make it.

✓ Not yet. I haven't made anything as a present, but maybe in the future I will if I have time.

'A s of the moment' is awkward; 'Not yet' suffices. 'Made something to give us a present' incorrectly uses 'us'—should be 'a present' or 'anything as a present'. Use 'anything' rather than 'something' in negative sentences. 'If there's a time to make it' is awkward; use 'if I have time' and future 'I will' for clarity.

× No, I believe giving a gift that is thoughtful, genuine, from the bottom of your heart, express feelings than giving an expensive gift.

✓ No, I believe giving a gift that is thoughtful, genuine, and from the bottom of your heart expresses feelings more than giving an expensive gift.

The verb 'express' must agree with singular subject 'giving a gift', so use 'expresses'. Items in a list need 'and' before the final item. Use comparative structure 'expresses feelings more than' to compare two types of gifts. Also reorder phrases for natural flow: 'thoughtful, genuine, and from the bottom of your heart'. 'From the bottom of your heart' functions as an adjective phrase and should be included in the list.