礼物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons or an example. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'gifts', 'recognize', 'other people's choices') and avoid repetition. Keep it to under five sentences and link ideas with words like 'because' or 'so'.

示例: To be honest, I'm not very good at giving gifts because I find it hard to recognize other people's preferences. For example, when choosing between books and gadgets I often guess and worry they won't like it, so I usually ask close friends for hints.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific examples. Use correct prepositions and plural/singular forms, and link ideas with words like 'for example' or 'such as'. Avoid repeating the same phrase. Keep the answer natural and concise.

示例: I usually give gifts on special occasions, such as birthdays and festivals. For example, I give toys or clothes at birthday parties, and sweets or small decorative items during Diwali and Christmas.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence about the main factors you consider (recipient's age, interests, and practicality). Then list two or three specific gift types as examples, using correct grammar and linking words like 'so' or 'for example'. Avoid redundant phrases.

示例: When choosing a gift, I mainly consider the person's age and interests. So, for example, if they like fashion I might choose a watch, T-shirt, or jeans; if they prefer personal care I might pick perfume or cosmetics.

建议: Answer directly with a concise topic sentence, then add one or two specific details about the handmade gift and why it mattered. Use correct tense and avoid repetition. Linking words like 'for example' or 'because' help coherence.

示例: Yes, I once gave a handmade gift to a friend for her birthday. It was a photo frame I made myself, and she loved it because it included a picture of our favourite memory together.

建议: Provide a clear opinion in the first sentence, then support it with one or two concise reasons and an example. Use correct phrases (e.g., 'express our feelings', 'matter whether') and linkers like 'because' or 'for example'. Avoid vague or unclear vocabulary.

示例: I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better because sincerity matters more than price. For example, a simple handwritten letter or a thoughtful handmade present often feels more meaningful than an expensive item.

× Speaking honestly, I'm not good at giving gift as I cannot as I can't recognise other person choices expression.

✓ To be honest, I'm not good at giving gifts because I can't recognize other people's expressions of choice.

Mix of issues: article/plural and awkward adverbial phrase. 'Speaking honestly' is unnatural; use 'To be honest'. 'gift' should be plural 'gifts' when speaking generally (Grammar Problem Type 1). 'other person choices expression' is wrong order and missing possessive: use 'other people's expressions of choice'. Suggestion: use natural discourse markers and correct plural/possessive forms. Grammar problem type ID: 1 & 13

× So for me preferring a person's choice is quite difficult.

✓ So for me, choosing according to a person's preferences is quite difficult.

Original uses awkward verb 'preferring' and noun phrase. 'Preferring a person's choice' is incorrect structure (Grammar Problem Type 26). Use 'choosing according to a person's preferences' for clarity. Also add a comma after introductory phrase. Suggestion: use 'choosing' with 'preferences' to express intended meaning. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I usually give gifts to other when there is some occasion like in the birthday parties or during some festivals like Diwali, Christmas that I usually give gifts to them.

✓ I usually give gifts to others on occasions like birthdays or during festivals such as Diwali and Christmas.

Problems: 'other' should be 'others' (plural) (Grammar Problem Type 1). Use correct preposition 'on occasions' rather than 'when there is some occasion' (Grammar Problem Type 11). 'in the birthday parties' should be 'birthdays'. Remove redundant clause 'that I usually give gifts to them'. Suggestion: simplify to 'on occasions like birthdays or during festivals such as...'. Grammar problem type ID: 1 & 11 & 26

× For me choosing a gift is a difficult part but then also I have to consider a gift.

✓ For me, choosing a gift is the difficult part, but I still have to think about what gift to give.

Missing comma after introductory phrase. 'a difficult part' is awkward; use 'the difficult part' or 'the hardest part'. 'consider a gift' is unnatural — use 'think about what gift to give' (Grammar Problem Type 26 and 22). Suggestion: use natural collocations: 'the difficult part' and 'think about what gift to give'. Grammar problem type ID: 22 & 26

× Then I consider watches, perfumes, some cosmetics, T-shirts, jeans as there is these are easy to give to other.

✓ I consider watches, perfumes, some cosmetics, T-shirts, and jeans because these are easy to give to others.

Issues: missing conjunction commas and 'as there is these are' is ungrammatical (Grammar Problem Type 26). 'other' should be 'others' (Grammar Problem Type 1). 'Then I consider' is fine but 'because' better expresses reason (Grammar Problem Type 16). Suggestion: join items with 'and', use 'because these are easy to give to others'. Grammar problem type ID: 1 & 26 & 16

× Yes, I had given a handmade gift to my to my friend on her birthday.

✓ Yes, I gave a handmade gift to my friend on her birthday.

Past perfect 'had given' is unnecessary; simple past 'gave' fits the context (Grammar Problem Type 5). Also repeated phrase 'to my to my' is an error (Grammar Problem Type 26). Suggestion: use simple past for a single past event and proofread to remove duplicates. Grammar problem type ID: 5 & 26

× I made the gift by myself. It was the photo frame I made.

✓ I made the gift myself. It was a photo frame I made.

'by myself' is okay but 'myself' is more natural here (Grammar Problem Type 13). 'the photo frame I made' should be 'a photo frame I made' because it introduces the object for the first time (Grammar Problem Type 17/22). Suggestion: use 'a' for first mention and avoid redundant phrasing. Grammar problem type ID: 17 & 13

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts express your feelings better?

Word order: adverb 'better' should follow the verb phrase in questions (Grammar Problem Type 20/26). Suggestion: place 'better' after 'express' to form correct comparative question. Grammar problem type ID: 20 & 26

× I don't think so. The expensive it's better to express our feelings as feeling stimulus is the price we made the gifts for.

✓ I don't think so. Expensive gifts do not express our feelings better; feelings are not determined by the price paid for the gifts.

Multiple issues: 'The expensive it's better' is ungrammatical and uses unnecessary 'the' (Grammar Problem Type 17). 'feeling stimulus is the price we made the gifts for' is unclear and ungrammatical (Grammar Problem Type 26). Rephrase to clarify that price does not determine feelings. Suggestion: use clear subject-verb structure and remove unnecessary articles. Grammar problem type ID: 17 & 26

× We made the gift from our heart.

✓ We make gifts from the heart.

Tense: original mixes past 'made' with general statement; use present simple for general truth (Grammar Problem Type 6). 'from our heart' is often expressed as 'from the heart' (Grammar Problem Type 17/13). Suggestion: use 'we make gifts from the heart' for a general principle. Grammar problem type ID: 6 & 17

× Then it doesn't matter it is expensive or inexpensive.

✓ Then it doesn't matter whether it is expensive or inexpensive.

Missing conjunction 'whether' to introduce the alternative (Grammar Problem Type 16). Suggestion: use 'whether' to link the two possibilities and improve clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 16

× The person will seize your feeling and emotion.

✓ The person will understand your feelings and emotions.

'Seize your feeling' is incorrect collocation; 'seize' means to take suddenly. Use 'understand' or 'recognize' (Grammar Problem Type 13). Also use plural 'feelings and emotions' for natural expression. Suggestion: choose verbs that match intended meaning and use plural nouns when referring generally. Grammar problem type ID: 13