网站— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more natural and concise, correct grammar and use linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details. Avoid typos (Notion, note-taking, organizing; IELTS).

示例: I often visit Notion to take notes and organize my study materials. In addition, I use YouTube to watch tutorial videos and read model passages that help me prepare for the IELTS exam.

建议: Improve accuracy and cohesion: correct small errors (newsfeed → the news feed; get up to date → keep up to date) and use linking words like 'and' or 'also' smoothly. Keep within 3–4 sentences and give one concrete example of how you use it.

示例: My favourite website is Facebook because it helps me keep up to date with friends and family. I also follow groups about travel and cooking, which is useful when I need ideas for trips or recipes.

建议: Fix grammar and clarity (website→websites; ILS→IELTS; decision threads unclear). Use a clear contrast linking word like 'but' then give two specific examples of new sites or activities. Avoid vague phrases.

示例: In the past I mainly used Facebook and YouTube to relax, but recently I have started visiting websites that help me prepare for the IELTS exam. For example, I watch tutorial videos on YouTube and read practice articles and forum threads to improve my writing and speaking skills.

建议: Be precise and avoid unclear or incorrect terms (research engine → search engine; 'trading Gemini and II powered circle' is unclear). Give one or two clear, specific examples of popular website types and explain why. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also'.

示例: Search engines such as Google are the most popular websites in my country because people use them to find information and news quickly. Social media sites like Facebook and messaging apps are also widely used for communication and news sharing.

建议: Improve grammar and clarity and remove small errors ('what tutorial videos' unclear; 'check firms' unclear). Use a topic sentence then two specific supporting reasons with linking words like 'for example' and 'also'.

示例: I prefer getting information from websites because they are faster and more convenient than books. For example, I can read up-to-date articles and watch tutorial videos, which makes it easy to find practical study advice.

建议: Fix minor errors (ILS→IELTS) and split into two sentences with a linking word. Be specific about the audience and one concrete feature of the site to sound more convincing.

示例: Yes, I would like to create a website to help people preparing for the IELTS exam. For example, I would offer free study notes, practice exercises, and short video tutorials tailored to each test section.

建议: This answer is incomplete and unclear. Start with a clear topic sentence describing one concrete thing you learned, then add a specific example and result. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'as a result'.

示例: Websites have taught me time-management strategies for studying. For example, I learned a daily study routine on a blogging site, and as a result I can now study more effectively and reduce procrastination.

× I often visit notion for not taking and organising study materials.

✓ I often visit Notion for note-taking and organizing study materials.

The app name Notion should be capitalized (proper noun). 'not taking' is incorrect; the correct noun form is 'note-taking' (hyphenated) and 'organising' (British) or 'organizing' (American). Use consistent capitalization and hyphenation for clarity.

× I also use YouTube to read model passages and watch videos that help me prepare for the IOS exam.

✓ I also use YouTube to read model passages and watch videos that help me prepare for the IELTS exam.

'IOS' is likely a typo for the exam name 'IELTS'. Ensure the proper noun is correct. The verbs 'read' and 'watch' are fine; correction focuses on the exam name to make the sentence accurate.

× My favorite website is Facebook because I can read newsfeed and get up to date with friends and family.

✓ My favorite website is Facebook because I can read the newsfeed and keep up to date with friends and family.

'newsfeed' commonly takes the article 'the'. 'get up to date' is unnatural; use 'keep up to date' or 'stay up to date'. This improves collocation and fluency.

× I also use groups and pages to follow topics I'm interested in such travel and cooking so it's a convenient way to find new ideas and stay connected.

✓ I also use groups and pages to follow topics I'm interested in, such as travel and cooking, so it's a convenient way to find new ideas and stay connected.

Missing preposition 'such as' to introduce examples. Also need commas to separate clauses. This fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× In the past I mainly used Facebook and YouTube to relax after work, but recently I've started visiting website to prepare for the ILS exam, for example, I watch tutorial videos on YouTube and read articles and decision threads to practice new skills.

✓ In the past I mainly used Facebook and YouTube to relax after work, but recently I've started visiting websites to prepare for the ILS exam. For example, I watch tutorial videos on YouTube and read articles and discussion threads to practice new skills.

'website' should be plural 'websites' or require an article. 'decision threads' is likely incorrect; 'discussion threads' is intended. Also split run-on sentence into two for clarity and capitalize 'For' after the full stop.

× Google is the most popular website in my country because people use it as a research engine to find information, news and services quickly.

✓ Google is the most popular website in my country because people use it as a search engine to find information, news, and services quickly.

'research engine' is the wrong collocation; 'search engine' is correct. Also add a comma in the list for clarity (optional Oxford comma). Subject-verb agreement is fine; main issue is word choice.

× Recently people have also started trading Gemini and II powered circle which some find useful for more conservatives.

✓ Recently people have also started using Gemini and AI-powered tools, which some find useful for more conservative users.

'trading Gemini and II powered circle' is unclear and likely incorrect. 'II' should be 'AI' and 'powered circle' unclear; replace with 'AI-powered tools'. Add a comma before 'which' and clarify 'more conservative' to 'more conservative users' for grammatical completeness.

× I prefer getting information from websites because they are faster and more convenient than books.

✓ I prefer to get information from websites because they are faster and more convenient than books.

Both 'prefer getting' and 'prefer to get' are grammatically acceptable, but 'prefer to get' is more natural in this context. No tense change required; suggestion improves formality.

× Websites also provide a wide variety of resources. For example, I can read recent articles, what tutorial videos and check firms for practice advice.

✓ Websites also provide a wide variety of resources. For example, I can read recent articles, watch tutorial videos, and check forums for practice advice.

'what tutorial videos' is incorrect — should be 'watch tutorial videos'. 'check firms' is a typo; 'forums' is intended. Add commas and 'and' for proper list structure.

× Yes, I would like to have my own website one day to help people preparing for ILS exams, I could offer study notes, practice exercises and video tutorials for free to anyone who needs them.

✓ Yes, I would like to have my own website one day to help people preparing for ILS exams. I could offer study notes, practice exercises, and video tutorials for free to anyone who needs them.

Run-on sentence should be split into two. Commas needed in the list. 'preparing for ILS exams' is acceptable, but consider 'preparing for the ILS exam' if referring to a single exam. Splitting improves clarity and grammar.

× I have learnt from websites that help my life is I don't know

✓ I'm not sure what I have learned from websites that help my life.

Original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'have learnt' (British) is acceptable, but the sentence lacks structure. Provide a complete sentence expressing uncertainty. Use contraction 'I'm' optional; the key is to form a coherent statement.