网站— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make the response more natural and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms and articles, provide one or two specific supporting details, and use simple linking words (for example, “because” or “so”). Keep it under five sentences.

示例: I often visit video game websites. I check them once a day because I like to read news about upcoming game releases and eSports tournaments. For example, I follow match results and team updates so I can stay informed about my favorite players.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence naming the website, then give specific reasons why you like it. Correct article use and noun forms, and avoid vague or unclear phrases. Use a linking word like “because” or “for example.”

示例: My favourite website is Enux Sport because it focuses on eSports team news. For example, it reports roster changes for teams like GSO and posts interviews with players, which helps me understand team performance.

建议: Provide a concise and coherent answer: state the change clearly (e.g., layout, design, content updates), give one specific example, and use correct grammar. Avoid filler phrases and keep it logical with linking words such as “for example” or “because.”

示例: Yes, they often change their layout and front page design. For example, the homepage is updated weekly with new images and featured articles so readers notice the latest news more easily.

建议: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and give specific examples and reasons. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., “gossip sites,” “celebrity news”) and avoid unclear words like “Dunday.” Use linking words like “because” or “for example.”

示例: In my country, gossip and celebrity news websites are very popular because people enjoy updates about stars. For example, these sites publish stories about celebrity relationships and new TV shows, attracting many visitors daily.

建议: State your preference clearly, give 1–2 specific reasons using correct grammar, and avoid contradictory or jumbled phrases. Use linking words like “because” and keep it concise (under five sentences).

示例: I prefer getting information from websites because they are faster and easier to search. For example, I can quickly find up‑to‑date articles and videos online instead of spending hours reading a whole book.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence (yes or no), then briefly explain your reason with specific details. Use simple, correct language and avoid unclear or exaggerated phrases. Keep it short and logical using a linking word like “because.”

示例: No, I would not like to have my own website because I prefer reading content created by others. Managing a website seems time‑consuming and I don't want the responsibility of creating regular posts.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence saying what you learned, then give 1–2 specific examples of useful skills or facts and explain how they helped you. Use correct grammar and linking words like “for example” and “so.”

示例: I have learned many useful things from websites, especially study techniques and current events. For example, online tutorials taught me how to use software for coursework, and news sites help me stay informed for class discussions.

× The most website I visit often is a video games website.

✓ The website I visit most often is a video video-games site.

Uses incorrect article and word order: 'The most website' is ungrammatical; use 'The website I visit most often' and include the definite article only if specific. Also 'video games website' is better as 'video-games site'. Improve word order and hyphenation for clarity.

× I really get into know what is the change of new video games.

✓ I really like to find out about the changes in new video games.

Incorrect verb phrase 'get into know' should be replaced with 'like to find out' or 'get to know'. Also 'what is the change of new video games' is awkward; use 'the changes in new video games' for correct noun phrase and preposition use.

× We gonna launch or news about eSports.

✓ They post news about eSports and upcoming launches.

'We gonna' is informal and ungrammatical for this context. The sentence lacks a clear subject and verb form. Use 'They post news' or 'It covers news about eSports and upcoming launches' to clarify meaning and correct tense/modal usage.

× So normally I check once a day and see what happened in the Esport.

✓ So normally I check once a day to see what has happened in eSports.

Use present perfect 'has happened' to connect past events to the present. 'the Esport' is incorrect article and singular form; use plural 'eSports' without 'the' unless referring to a specific event.

× Oh, my favorite website is one called Enux Sport and is about the new changes of the teams of esports like Leakoplagans or GSO, they are the most important gains that follow.

✓ Oh, my favorite site is one called Enux Sport; it reports on roster changes for esports teams like Leakoplagans or GSO, which are the most important updates to follow.

Run-on sentence and article issues: 'is one called' is acceptable but needed punctuation; 'the new changes of the teams of esports' should be 'roster changes for esports teams'. 'Gains' is incorrect word choice; use 'updates' or 'changes'.

× So that's announced one.

✓ So that's the one I follow.

Awkward phrasing and article use: 'announced one' is incorrect. 'the one I follow' correctly identifies the website.

× Absolutely. All the time when I visit this have a new a landing, a new one page so you can always be interested in the news that they show because I don't know, it's ultra connective because the new generation, they actually need a change in the colors every time.

✓ Absolutely. Every time I visit, there is a new landing page, so I am always interested in the news they show. I think the site is very engaging because the younger generation wants frequent color and design changes.

Original is run-on and ungrammatical with incorrect word order and articles ('a new a landing'). Clarify and split into sentences; replace 'ultra connective' with 'engaging' and correct pronoun use and pluralization.

× Oh in my country, all the gossip websites are the most visited for the Colombian people.

✓ Oh, in my country, gossip websites are the most visited by Colombians.

Use correct preposition 'by' for the agent, and prefer 'Colombians' rather than 'the Colombian people'. Remove unnecessary articles.

× So every Dunday a new relationship of a model couple a new TV series going to play music entertainment team.

✓ So every Sunday there are new stories about celebrity relationships, new TV series, or music and entertainment news.

Original is unintelligible and has wrong word choices and structure ('Dunday', 'relationship of a model couple'). Clarify meaning and use correct nouns and sentence structure.

× Indeed, I prefer receiving information for websites because it's a kind of faster.

✓ Indeed, I prefer getting information from websites because it's faster.

Use correct preposition 'from' not 'for'. 'Receiving' is okay but 'getting' is more natural; remove 'a kind of' which is informal and unnecessary.

× Books are a little bit more long to read so I not really can't get into a long reading right now but a website offers a kind faster and reliable way to

✓ Books take longer to read, so I can't really get into long readings right now, but a website offers a faster and more reliable way to find information.

Incorrect comparative 'more long' should be 'longer'; double negative 'not really can't' is incorrect. 'a kind faster' is wrong; use 'a faster and more reliable way'. Also complete the sentence with 'to find information'.

× Oh no, I don't really want to on my website.

✓ Oh no, I don't really want to have my own website.

Incorrect verb-preposition combination 'want to on' is ungrammatical. Use 'want to have' or 'want my own website'.

× I prefer just only reading and know about the causing for others than create my own I don't get into that kind of high touch and extremist way of look at information.

✓ I prefer just reading and learning about what others create rather than making my own site; I don't want that high-touch, extreme way of presenting information.

Run-on with incorrect word choices ('causing', 'high touch', 'extremist way of look'). Rephrase to natural English and correct gerunds and infinitives.

× Almost everything the knowledge I know comes from websites.

✓ Almost all the knowledge I have comes from websites.

Word order and article use: 'Almost everything the knowledge I know' is awkward. Use 'Almost all the knowledge I have' for natural phrasing and correct verb 'have' for possession.

× I noticed that they are really fast to get the information so you only have to have know and learn how to research online to have their information and accurate information.

✓ I have noticed that websites are very quick for finding information, so you just need to know how to research online to obtain accurate information.

Tense and verb choice: 'noticed' can be present perfect 'have noticed' to connect to current situation. Phrases like 'have to have know' are ungrammatical; use 'need to know'. 'Have their information and accurate information' is redundant; use 'obtain accurate information'.