网站— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 内容明确且相关，但有少量语法和表达不自然之处。可以用一到两句主题句直接回答后，用连接词（such as, for instance, therefore）更自然地展开细节；注意时态和冠词（e.g. "language-learning apps"）。另外，回答不应过长，控制在3–4句以内。

示例: I usually visit educational websites because I’m studying English. For instance, I use language-learning apps and sites that offer grammar lessons and listening exercises, which help me practise every day. These resources are convenient and allow me to study anytime, so I can improve steadily.

建议: 表达存在明显错误和用词不当（如“I’m very upset”与上下文不符，代词性别/指代不清）。需要一个直接的主题句（My favourite website is...），并用连接词（because, for example）清楚解释原因与习惯。保持句子自然且简洁。

示例: My favourite website is BiliBili because it offers a wide range of free short videos. For example, I often watch travel vlogs, cooking demonstrations and educational tutorials there, and I usually watch cooking clips in the evening to relax.

建议: 回答思路正确但有语法和词汇错误（如“simplified check layout”，“makes the more user friendly”）。建议先给出主题句（Yes, they have changed），然后用明确的连接词描述具体变化和影响，避免重复。注意可数名词和形容词顺序。

示例: Yes, the websites I use have changed recently. For example, my favourite sites now have a much cleaner, simplified layout, which makes them more user-friendly and faster to navigate, so I can find what I need more quickly.

建议: 回答内容相关但有时态和习惯用法问题（如“used to share”暗示过去习惯）。建议用一个明确主题句并用连接词列举功能和原因，提供更具体例子（e.g. groups, payments）使内容更丰富。

示例: Social media platforms like WeChat and QQ are the most popular in my country because they let people keep in touch with family and friends for free. Besides messaging, people use them to share photos, watch short videos, join groups and even make payments.

建议: 回答清晰且有支持细节，但可以更自然地连接观点与例子（use linking words）并补充一对比较（e.g. credibility vs convenience）。注意避免重复“because”。

示例: I prefer getting information from websites because they are more convenient and searchable than books. For example, I use learning apps to study English, so I can quickly find specific explanations and practice exercises, although I still consult books for in-depth study.

建议: 回答直接且具体，語言自然。可以再用一兩句說明目的或頻率，使內容更完整（e.g. how often you would update, who your audience is）。注意避免重复相似句子。

示例: Yes, I would like to create a personal website to share my travel photos and write short posts about daily life for my family and friends. For example, I would upload a photo album after each trip and write a short entry about the highlights so my relatives can follow my travels.

建议: 句子有严重语法和表达错误，不连贯（缺少主语，词序混乱如“do in in”）。应以完整的主题句开头，随后用连接词详细说明具体学到的内容和例子，注意时态和词序。控制在2–3句内。

示例: I have learned practical cooking techniques and improved my English on websites. For example, I often watch short recipe videos in the evening to learn new cooking methods, and I use English-learning sites to study grammar and vocabulary.

× I often visit educational websites because I am studying English at the moment. For example, I use language apps and sites that offer grammar lessons and listening exercises, which helps me practice every day.

✓ I often visit educational websites because I am studying English at the moment. For example, I use language apps and sites that offer grammar lessons and listening exercises, which help me practice every day.

从句中先行词为复数（language apps and sites），关系代词引导的定语从句中谓语动词应与先行词保持一致。原句中使用了单数动词 helps，与复数先行词不一致。应使用 help。建议：遇到由 and 连接的复数先行词时，从句动词用复数形式。

× I'm very upset it's Billy Billy because he offers a wide range of short videos for free, such as travel blogs, cooking demonstrations and educational tutorials.

✓ My favourite website is BiliBili because it offers a wide range of short videos for free, such as travel blogs, cooking demonstrations and educational tutorials.

句子中使用了人称代词 he 指代网站，网站应使用 it；并且开头的 “I'm very upset it's Billy Billy” 意义混乱，应该回答最喜欢的网站名称。原句词序和代词使用不当，易造成理解困难。建议：指代无生命事物用 it，并在回答喜欢的网站时直接说 'My favourite website is ...'。

× There have been changes to the website. For example, my favorite sites now have a much cleaner, simplified check layout.

✓ There have been changes to the website. For example, my favourite sites now have a much cleaner, simplified layout.

原句中 'check layout' 词组不合适，可能是多余或拼写错误，且与句意不符。应删去多余词 'check' 保留 'layout'。建议：写句子前先确定要用的名词，避免多余或拼写错误词干扰意思。

× This makes the more user friendly and faster to navigate so I feel more comfortable and find what I need more quickly.

✓ This makes them more user-friendly and faster to navigate, so I feel more comfortable and can find what I need more quickly.

原句中缺少指代对象，应使用代词 them 指代前文的 sites；此外 'user friendly' 作复合形容词应连字符 'user-friendly'；句中缺少情态或助动词 'can' 来表达能力或可能性。建议：注意代词指代清晰、复合形容词连字符和在需要时加上助动词 'can'。

× Besides chatting, people also used to share photos, watch videos.

✓ Besides chatting, people also share photos and watch videos.

原句 'used to share' 表示过去常常做但现在不再做，与上下文谈论现在流行的网站不符。应使用一般现在时 'share'。另外原句缺少并列连词 and。建议：描述习惯性或现在仍在进行的行为用一般现在时，并注意并列结构完整。

× Learned practical cooking techniques and then advanced English points from websites.

✓ I learned practical cooking techniques and advanced English points from websites.

原句缺少主语 'I' 和时态助动词位置错误，而且语序不完整。将动词改为完整陈述句 'I learned ... from websites'。建议：陈述过去经历时提供主语并使用完整句子结构。

× For example, I usually use do in in the evening to watch short recipe videos that teach me new cooking methods.

✓ For example, I usually use Douyin in the evening to watch short recipe videos that teach me new cooking methods.

原句 'do in' 明显是对应用名 Douyin 的误拼写并被分成两个词，导致语义不明。应该写出正确应用名 'Douyin'（或 'TikTok' 视情况）。建议：注意专有名词拼写并检查空格不要拆分单词。