网站— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and organize your response: start with a clear topic sentence naming the main types, then give one or two brief specific examples using linking words. Reduce fillers (uh, maybe) and correct grammar (e.g. 'social websites are what I really like to look at').

示例: I often visit three kinds of websites: educational sites, school apps and social media. For example, I use ChatGPT for learning and my school portal for assignments, and I browse YouTube and Xiaohongshu for entertainment and ideas.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence naming one favourite site, then explain 2 specific reasons using linking words. Avoid hesitations and grammatical errors (e.g. 'recent topics', 'learn new languages', 'find news on Psychology Today').

示例: My favourite website is ChatGPT because I can practice languages and get quick explanations for study topics. For instance, I use it to check grammar and to summarize recent psychology articles from sites like Psychology Today.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence saying yes/no then explain the change with specific contrasting examples and linking words (‘previously… but now…’). Remove fillers and fix phrasing ('types of websites', 'social media sites', 'technical tools that help my studies').

示例: Yes. Previously I mainly used social media sites for entertainment, but now I visit technical and academic websites more often because they help me with research and coursework.

建议: Give a clearer general statement about popular sites, then give 1–2 specific examples and a brief reason. Avoid repeating uncertainty; if unsure, say 'in my experience' and then provide evidence or examples.

示例: In my experience, social media platforms are the most popular in my country. For example, many people use Xiaohongshu and TikTok for shopping tips and short videos because they are entertaining and easy to use.

建议: Start with a direct preference sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words (e.g. 'because' and 'for example'). Correct grammar ('learn new things', 'messages', 'if I need to learn'). Reduce hesitations.

示例: I prefer getting information from websites because they are more convenient and up-to-date. For example, I can quickly search on my laptop for the latest research and watch tutorial videos when I need help.

建议: Give a clearer position (yes/no/maybe) and explain specific purposes for your website using linking words. Mention what features it would have and how AI would help. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

示例: Maybe — I would like to create a personal website in the future to share my academic projects and blog about AI. For example, I would include a portfolio, study resources and an AI chatbot to help visitors find articles.

建议: Provide a clear topic sentence summarizing key benefits, then give 2–3 specific, concrete examples (e.g. improving essays, learning research methods, shopping tips) with linking phrases. Avoid vague or confusing phrases and ensure grammatical clarity.

示例: Websites have helped me improve my essays and expand my knowledge. For instance, I use online writing labs for essay structure, watch tutorials for research methods, and browse fashion blogs for clothing ideas.

× Well, there are many kinds of websites that I visit, such as the ChatGPT or our school app website and some social media website like YouTube and Xiaohongshu.

✓ Well, there are many kinds of websites that I visit, such as ChatGPT, our school app, and some social media websites like YouTube and Xiaohongshu.

Incorrect use of the definite article 'the' before 'ChatGPT' and inconsistent singular/plural for 'website/websites'. Proper nouns like ChatGPT (a service name) do not need 'the'. Use plural 'websites' when referring to multiple social media platforms. Also remove redundant 'website' after 'school app' and add commas for clarity.

× Maybe, uh, the social website is what I really to look at.

✓ Maybe, uh, social websites are what I really like to look at.

Subject-verb agreement and missing verb: 'social website' should be plural if speaking generally, and the sentence lacks a main verb after 'really' — 'like to look at' is the correct verb phrase. Changed 'is' to 'are' to match plural subject.

× Probably the ChatGPT of the Gemini because I usually, uh, talk to AI for some recently topic and I can, uh, search on the, uh, ChatGPT to learn some new languages or uh, had to know some news like, uh, Psychology Today and uh.

✓ Probably ChatGPT or Gemini, because I usually talk to AI about recent topics and I can use ChatGPT to learn new languages or find news from sources like Psychology Today.

Removed unnecessary 'the' before ChatGPT and corrected 'of the Gemini' to 'or Gemini' for clarity. 'for some recently topic' is incorrect; use 'about recent topics'. 'search on the ChatGPT' -> 'use ChatGPT'. 'had to know' is incorrect past construction; use 'find' or 'learn'. Also made nouns plural where appropriate.

× First of all, maybe the kind of the website cause, uh, I used to visit more social media website and now I would like to use some uh, technical tool websites that can help my, uh, academic performance.

✓ First of all, maybe the types of websites changed: I used to visit more social media websites, and now I prefer to use technical tool websites that can help my academic performance.

Tense and number issues: 'cause' is wrong here; use 'changed' to indicate change. 'the kind of the website' is awkward; 'types of websites' is better. 'social media website' should be plural. 'would like to use' is acceptable but 'prefer to use' fits spoken preference. Adjusted word order for natural English.

× Well, it's hard to say that because I'm really, uh, have no idea about what's popular in our country because different people use different websites and probably the most people will use the social media website like Xiaohongshu or Tiktok to, uh, enjoy themselves.

✓ Well, it's hard to say because I really have no idea what is popular in our country. Different people use different websites, and most people probably use social media websites like Xiaohongshu or TikTok to enjoy themselves.

Pronoun and auxiliary errors: 'I'm really, uh, have no idea' mixes 'I'm' and 'have' incorrectly; use 'I really have no idea'. 'what's popular' is fine but expanded to 'what is popular'. 'the most people' should be 'most people'. 'the social media website' -> 'social media websites'. Also corrected capitalization of TikTok.

× Uh, As for me, the information from websites, uh, is more convenient for me because I use my laptop every day and you can just open the website and learn many new knowledge and some message if you have to learn.

✓ As for me, information from websites is more convenient because I use my laptop every day and I can just open a website to learn new things and find information when I need to learn.

Tense and article usage: remove unnecessary 'the' before 'information'. 'learn many new knowledge' is incorrect—'knowledge' is uncountable; use 'learn new things' or 'gain new knowledge'. 'some message' is incorrect; use 'find information'. Changed 'you' to 'I' to keep the perspective consistent with 'As for me'.

× Well, I don't really think about it, but that's a good idea. Maybe in the future I will create a new website for me and the AI technology will support my idea. I think that will be useful and interesting.

✓ Well, I haven't really thought about it, but that's a good idea. Maybe in the future I will create a website for myself and AI technology will support my idea. I think that would be useful and interesting.

Tense and article/pronoun use: 'don't really think about it' should be past perfect or present perfect — 'haven't really thought about it' is more natural. 'a new website for me' -> 'a website for myself'. 'the AI technology' -> 'AI technology' without 'the'. Changed 'will be' to 'would be' as a speculative tone.

× I think that can be explained in my new perspectives such as the academic perspective such as our essay improvement or some extended knowledge and some lifestyle clothes selection, their mining blocks that you can choose and what's more is a lifetime path.

✓ I think I have gained new perspectives that help in academics, such as improving essays, gaining broader knowledge, and choosing lifestyle or clothing options; these are building blocks for life-long development.

Original sentence is run-on and unclear. Restructured for clarity: 'new perspectives' followed by parallel examples. Replaced 'some extended knowledge' with 'gaining broader knowledge', 'lifestyle clothes selection' with 'choosing lifestyle or clothing options', and 'their mining blocks' with 'these are building blocks'. 'what's more is a lifetime path' changed to 'for life-long development' for natural phrasing.