网站— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more confident and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples and a brief reason. Avoid repetitions and filler words (umm, uh). Use linking words if adding details.

示例: I usually visit social media sites such as TikTok and Instagram, and I also use several English-learning websites. For example, I follow short lessons on an English app to improve my vocabulary and watch learning videos on Instagram for pronunciation tips.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence naming the site or type, then explain specifically what you learn and why it helps you. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and avoid repeating words.

示例: My favourite websites are English-learning platforms because I can learn new vocabulary and grammar there. For example, I use a site that teaches phrases and offers exercises, which helps me speak more confidently since English is not my native language.

建议: Answer directly and organize your ideas: state whether there are changes, then give specific changes you observed. Use linking phrases (however, but, for example) and avoid hesitations.

示例: I haven't noticed major changes to the websites I use; they look mostly the same. However, I have noticed fewer ads recently, and some platforms now update their layout occasionally to improve usability.

建议: Start with a clear statement about popular site types, then give specific examples and a brief reason. Use linking words (for example, because, such as) and correct simple grammar (plural/singular).

示例: Social media platforms are very popular in my country, especially YouTube and TikTok, because many people create videos to gain followers. For example, young creators upload short clips and tutorials that often go viral.

建议: Give a direct preference and support it with two specific reasons. Avoid absolute statements and repetitions. Use linking words (because, so, therefore) and correct grammar (I prefer, information without article).

示例: I prefer getting information from websites because they are faster and offer up-to-date news. For instance, I can quickly search online for recent events or watch tutorial videos, which is more convenient than reading books.

建议: Give a clear opinion and then explain reasons with specific details. Use linking words (but, although, because) and more natural phrasing (maintain a website, run it). Avoid contradictions in one answer.

示例: I would like to have my own website in the future, but not right now because maintaining a website requires time and effort. If I had free time, I might create a blog about language learning, but at the moment I can't commit to running it full time.

建议: Answer with a clear topic sentence describing one or two things you learned, then give specific examples of websites or tools and explain how they helped. Use linking words and avoid vague phrases.

示例: I have learned many practical skills from websites, such as problem-solving using online tutorials and AI tools. For example, I use an AI writing assistant to improve my essays and watch step-by-step videos that help me understand difficult topics more clearly.

× I only, I only visit a website like Tiktok, Instagram and umm, some English learning, uh, websites and uh, yes, I only visit these type of website.

✓ I only visit websites like TikTok, Instagram and some English learning websites; yes, I only visit these types of websites.

The sentence has article and count noun errors. 'a website' is incorrect when listing multiple sites; use plural 'websites'. 'these type of website' should be 'these types of websites' to match plural form. Also capitalize brand name TikTok. Suggestion: match singular/plural consistently and ensure noun forms agree with demonstratives (these + plural).

× Also my favorite website is English learning because I sometimes I go there and learn some new in new words, new vocabulary about words and because English is not our native language so I had a difficulty to speak about it.

✓ My favorite websites are English-learning sites because I sometimes go there to learn new words and vocabulary, and because English is not our native language, I have difficulty speaking it.

Errors include tense and agreement: 'is English learning' should be plural 'are English-learning sites' if referring to sites in general. Remove redundant 'I sometimes I'. 'learn some new in new words' is ungrammatical; use 'learn new words and vocabulary'. 'I had a difficulty' incorrectly uses past tense; present 'I have difficulty' fits the ongoing situation. Also 'speak about it' is awkward; use 'speaking it'. Suggestion: streamline clauses, maintain present tense for habitual actions, and ensure pronoun and verb forms match.

× Is it, I think no, there is no, I don't see any change in that website because there's a lot of updates coming nowadays. But I think it it, it is the same website. Like I think the change I notice is ads like now I don't see ads that much.

✓ No, I don't see any changes in those websites because there are many updates these days. I think they are basically the same. The change I notice is fewer ads; I don't see ads as much now.

Tense and number problems: use present simple for habitual facts. 'that website' should be plural 'those websites' if referring to multiple sites. 'there's a lot of updates coming' mixes singular contraction with plural noun; use 'there are many updates coming' or 'there are many updates these days'. 'it it, it is the same website' is repetitive; simplify. 'I don't see ads that much' is acceptable but more natural as 'I don't see ads as much now' or 'fewer ads'. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb agreement and consistent plural forms, avoid repetitions.

× I don't know like which websites are popular in our country, but I use I think that social media is very popular in our country because people makes videos, YouTube, Tiktok, so they get famous.

✓ I don't know which websites are most popular in our country, but I think social media is very popular because people make videos on YouTube and TikTok and become famous.

Subject-verb agreement: 'people makes' is incorrect; plural subject 'people' requires 'make'. Also 'YouTube, Tiktok' need preposition 'on' and correct capitalization. 'so they get famous' improved to 'become famous'. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with subject and use appropriate prepositions for platforms.

× I don't think these two websites are now getting famous and getting popular in our country.

✓ I don't think these two websites are becoming famous and popular in our country now.

Awkward phrasing and article timing: 'getting famous and getting popular' is repetitive; use 'becoming famous and popular'. Placement of 'now' is more natural at the end. No article needed before 'famous' or 'popular'. Suggestion: avoid redundant verbs and place time adverbs appropriately.

× I think I'm I'm prefer getting information from websites because I don't read books.

✓ I think I prefer getting information from websites because I don't read books.

Modal/auxiliary misuse and tense: 'I'm prefer' incorrectly mixes 'am' with main verb; use simple present 'I prefer' for habits. Remove duplicate 'I'm'. Suggestion: use simple present for regular preferences.

× So I so I I don't read books definitely I will never get a information about anything so websites can give me updates about every news.

✓ I don't read books, so I would never get information from them; websites can give me updates about the news.

Article error: 'a information' is incorrect; 'information' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. Tense and modality: 'definitely I will never get' is strong and awkward; 'I would never get information from them' is clearer. 'every news' is incorrect; use 'the news' or 'news updates'. Suggestion: treat 'information' as uncountable and use correct articles and noun phrases.

× Definitely I would love to have my own website, but it's proper job like you have to maintain your website.

✓ I would definitely love to have my own website, but it's a proper job because you have to maintain a website.

Article and modal placement: move 'definitely' to natural position after subject and before verb. 'it's proper job' needs an article 'a proper job'. Also 'your website' changed to 'a website' for general statement. Suggestion: place adverbs correctly and include necessary articles.

× It's a proper full time job. So I'm not free at this moment. So I don't think that I can be run this website.

✓ It's a full-time job, so I'm not free at the moment. I don't think I can run such a website.

Verb form error: 'I can be run this website' is ungrammatical; use 'I can run' or 'I could run'. 'At this moment' more natural as 'at the moment'. Hyphenate 'full-time'. Suggestion: use correct verb constructions after modal verbs and natural time expressions.

× So I'm not interested in this.

✓ So I'm not interested in that.

Demonstrative pronoun choice: 'this' points to something near the speaker; 'that' refers to the idea previously mentioned (having a website). Use 'that' for the earlier topic. Suggestion: choose demonstrative based on discourse reference.

× OK I learned a lot of things and from websites like study if you have to solve anything like you can use AI tools and different kind locker sites that can teach you a different lessons.

✓ I have learned a lot from websites; for example, if you need to solve something you can use AI tools and various learning sites that can teach you different lessons.

Run-on and structure issues: sentence mixes tenses and has awkward phrases ('different kind locker sites'). Use present perfect 'I have learned' for experience up to now. 'If you have to solve anything' better as 'if you need to solve something'. 'Different kind locker sites' unclear; replace with 'various learning sites'. Ensure noun number agreement: 'a different lessons' is wrong; use 'different lessons'. Suggestion: break long sentences into clear clauses, keep tense consistent, and use precise vocabulary.