网站— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答要更有条理并减少重复，先给出主句说明常去的网站，再用一两句具体举例，使用连接词使句子连贯。注意发音和词汇准确（例如 Bilibili, variety shows 而不是 "suburbs"）。

示例: I often visit Bilibili, a popular Chinese video website. It hosts a wide range of content, such as variety shows like Running Man and educational tutorials, so I can both relax and learn on the same platform.

建议: 句子应更简洁并用正确名称和词汇（Bilibili, affordable subscription）。避免填充词（umm），并用连接词说明原因或比较。

示例: My favourite website is Bilibili because it offers many entertaining live shows like Running Man. Moreover, its VIP subscription is relatively affordable compared to other apps, so I get good value for money.

建议: 要注意时态和主谓一致（didn't used to have / now has many ads）。给出完整具体的例子並使用连接词（for example, however）。避免句子未完成。

示例: Yes. In the past Bilibili didn't have many ads, but now it has a lot of advertisements. For example, whenever I open the app an ad often appears at the start, and even after I close one, another one may play.

建议: 先直接回答问题（Video websites），然后用一两句具体原因支持，注意句子语法（"because the apps... cost too much"）。避免模糊表述（so much popular）。

示例: Video websites are very popular in my country because many people prefer free streaming services. Since paid apps are often expensive, free video platforms attract a larger audience.

建议: 回答要明确并用连贯的理由比较两者。注意语法（websites, books, is/are），避免无关或混乱的参考（The Hobbit），并减少犹豫词。

示例: I prefer getting information from websites because they are more convenient and faster to search. Although books are more detailed and reliable for specialized topics, I usually use websites for quick learning and refer to books when I need in-depth knowledge.

建议: 先直接回答（No），然后给出合理原因并用正确词汇（opinion, ordinary people, qualifications, privacy concerns）。避免不准确表达（fines, disturbed）并保持礼貌和简洁。

示例: No, I wouldn't like to have my own website right now because I feel it's unnecessary for an ordinary person. I am also concerned about managing it and protecting my privacy, so I prefer using existing social platforms instead.

建议: 回答要更流畅并具体说明学到的内容（grammar, listening, vocabulary）和学习方式（step-by-step tutorials）。使用连接词（for example, therefore）并修正措辞（availability → available）。

示例: I have learned many skills from educational videos, such as English grammar, pronunciation, and listening practice. For example, I followed a step-by-step English course on Bilibili, which helped me improve my vocabulary and speaking confidence.

× I usually visit Bilibili, which is a famous video website in China and there are plenty of videos on that.

✓ I usually visit Bilibili, which is a famous video website in China and there are plenty of videos on it.

句中代词“that”用于指代之前的名词时不自然，通常网站应使用“it”来指代单一事物。建议用“it”来指代Bilibili。

× For example, they are uh, suburbs like friends and some lavish people like running man and they there are even some study videos about.

✓ For example, there are variety shows like Keep Running and some celebrity vlogs, and there are even some study videos.

原句结构混乱，主语和谓语不一致，且单词使用错误（如“suburbs”、“friends”不合上下文）。建议重组句子，明确主语（there are）并使用正确名词（variety shows, celebrity vlogs）。

× My favorite website is Billy Billy which is the umm popular video website in China.

✓ My favorite website is Bilibili, which is a popular video website in China.

原句中网站名称拼写错误且多余的定冠词“the”不必要。应使用正确名称“Bilibili”，并删除不必要的“the”。

× I can watch the interesting live shows like Running Man on that and also the VIP not cost too much compared to the other app.

✓ I can watch interesting live shows like Keep Running on it, and the VIP membership doesn't cost too much compared to other apps.

用词和介词不当：用“on that”不自然，应为“on it”；“the VIP not cost”缺少助动词且主谓不一致，应为“the VIP membership doesn't cost”；“the other app”应使用复数“other apps”表示一般比较。

× Yes, in the past the website don't have any advertisement, but now there are plenty of that.

✓ Yes, in the past the website didn't have any advertisements, but now there are plenty of them.

主谓不一致：“website”作为单数，过去式否定应为“didn't have”；“advertisement”需用复数“advertisements”；指代这些广告应使用“them”。

× For example, whenever I open this website, there's a there's an advertisement shows in front of my face and when I close one, there's.

✓ For example, whenever I open the website, an advertisement appears on my screen, and when I close one, another one appears.

原句有重复词汇（"there's a there's an"）且谓语使用不当（"shows"用法错误）。建议用“appears”表达广告出现，并说明关闭后会出现另一个广告。

× I guess is the video website which is free to watch the programs because they apps that we usually use cost too much on the subscription.

✓ I guess video websites that offer free programs are popular because the apps we usually use charge high subscription fees.

原句缺少主语且结构混乱（“I guess is...”不完整）；“they apps”错误，应为“the apps”或“the apps we usually use”；将句子重构以表达原因。

× So this kind of website is so much popular.

✓ So this kind of website is very popular.

“so much popular”是不自然的搭配，应使用“very popular”或“so popular”。建议使用“very popular”。

× I prefer getting information from website because that's more convenient than getting in the book and I don't have The Hobbit to reading too much, umm, specialized books.

✓ I prefer getting information from websites because that's more convenient than getting it from books, and I don't have to read many specialized books.

介词使用错误：应为“from websites”和“from books”；“I don't have The Hobbit to reading”完全不合语法，需改为“I don't have to read many specialized books”。

× And this information are mostly coming from the books, which is really, uh, specialized.

✓ And this information mostly comes from books, which are usually quite specialized.

“information”作不可数名词应使用单数动词“comes”；但后半句“which is... specialized”指代“books”，应改为复数“are”。

× Well, I don't really need that kind of website because in my notion, I think just as celebrities can have their own website, so the normal people like me don't have the qualification to get 1 and I don't want to have any fines.

✓ Well, I don't really need that kind of website because in my opinion, celebrities can have their own websites, but ordinary people like me don't have the qualification to have one, and I don't want to risk any fines.

代词和短语使用不当："in my notion"应为"in my opinion"；"get 1"应为"have one"；"any fines"可用"risk any fines"更自然。

× That's really disturbed.

✓ That would really be troublesome.

“That's really disturbed”语法和词汇都不当。应使用“be troublesome”或“be disturbing”来表达造成困扰。建议用更自然的表达“would be troublesome”。

× Well, I search on the educational videos on the website and learn step by step with the educational video.

✓ Well, I search for educational videos on the website and learn step by step from them.

动词搭配错误：应使用“search for”而不是“search on”；“learn ... with the educational video”不自然，改为“learn ... from them”。

× For example, I searched the English teaching course on availability, so I can learn a lot of knowledge of English from that.

✓ For example, I searched for English courses on the platform, so I can learn a lot about English from them.

原句结构混乱，“searched the English teaching course on availability”不通顺。应使用“searched for English courses on the platform”并用“learn a lot about English from them”。