新闻— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammar and sentence naturalness: use present simple consistently, avoid redundant phrases, and make the sentence more concise. For example, say you check the news daily and mention why briefly.

示例: Yes, I'm interested in news. I check news on my phone every day because it helps me stay updated on current events.

建议: Correct pronouns and verb forms, use clearer word order and prepositions, and be more specific about sources. Link ideas with a cohesive phrase.

示例: I usually get news from Facebook and Instagram. I follow international and Malaysian news pages, so I can quickly see what is happening both locally and abroad.

建议: Fix grammar (use correct auxiliary and adjective forms) and give a brief reason. Use a topic sentence then a supporting detail with a linking word like "because."

示例: No, I would not like to be a journalist because I'm more interested in a medical career and studying healthcare subjects.

建议: Use correct tense (present perfect or simple past) and simplify; avoid repeating times. Also correct possessive/verb forms and add a brief reason with linking word "because."

示例: Yes, I read the news this morning on Facebook and Instagram because they are easy to use and I don't need to buy a newspaper.

建议: Improve grammar and cohesion: use correct verbs and prepositions, remove unclear words (e.g. "career"), and connect sentences with linking words like "also" or "besides." Provide a specific example of a topic you discuss.

示例: Yes, I often discuss the news with my friends. For example, we share opinions about politics or health stories, and sometimes they tell me about articles I haven't read.

× Yes, I'm interested in news. Every day I will use my phone to look at the news and I can know that what is the latest news.

✓ Yes, I'm interested in news. Every day I use my phone to look at the news so I can find out what the latest news is.

The response describes a habitual action so simple present is required instead of 'will'. Also the clause 'I can know that what is the latest news' is ungrammatical: use 'find out' or 'know' and order subject and complement correctly: 'what the latest news is'. Use 'so' to show purpose/result. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Usually I will use mine Facebook or Instagram to look at the latest news so I can know what happen nowadays in international or in Malaysia.

✓ Usually I use my Facebook or Instagram to look at the latest news so I can know what happens internationally or in Malaysia.

Use simple present for habitual action instead of 'will' (type 6). 'Mine' is incorrect pronoun form; use 'my' (type 12). 'Happen' needs third person singular 'happens' to agree with 'what' as a singular content (type 27). 'Nowadays in international' is unidiomatic; use 'internationally' and correct word order 'in Malaysia'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× No, I does not have interested to be a journalist. I'm interested in doing medical.

✓ No, I am not interested in being a journalist. I'm interested in studying medicine.

'Does not' is incorrect with subject 'I'; use 'do/does' only for present simple negatives with verbs, but here use 'am not' because 'interested' is an adjective (type 2 and 26). 'Have interested' is wrong; say 'interested in' + gerund or noun. 'Doing medical' is unidiomatic; use 'studying medicine' or 'working in medicine'. Grammar problem type ID:2

× Yes, I had read the news this morning and this evening by using my Facebook app Instagram.

✓ Yes, I read the news this morning and this evening using my Facebook and Instagram apps.

Use simple past 'read' (pronounced 'red') for completed actions in the past (type 5) rather than past perfect 'had read' which requires a reference point. Also correct noun forms: 'Facebook app Instagram' is unclear; separate services and pluralize 'apps' if referring to both. Grammar problem type ID:5

× This is because Facebook and Instagram are very easy to get the latest news and I no need to buy the newspaper.

✓ This is because Facebook and Instagram make it very easy to get the latest news, and I do not need to buy a newspaper.

'Are very easy to get' is awkward; use 'make it very easy to' + verb (type 16). 'I no need' is incorrect word order and missing auxiliary; use 'I do not need' (type 6 for present tense and type 27 subject-verb agreement). Grammar problem type ID:16

× Yes, I always talk with my friends and career about the latest news so we can sharing our opinion about this news.

✓ Yes, I always talk with my friends and colleagues about the latest news so we can share our opinions about it.

Use simple present 'share' not 'sharing' after 'can' (modal + base verb) (type 4 and 8). 'Career' is the wrong word for 'people you work with'—use 'colleagues' (type 12/13). 'Opinion' should be plural 'opinions' if more than one person, and 'about this news' is better as 'about it' or 'about the news'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I beside that we also can exchange about the latest news that I didn't read before.

✓ Besides that, we can also exchange information about the latest news that I haven't read before.

'I beside that' is incorrect; use 'Besides that' or 'In addition' to add information (type 16). Word order 'we also can' is acceptable but more natural 'we can also' (type 20). Use 'exchange information about' rather than 'exchange about' (type 11). Use present perfect 'haven't read before' to indicate up to now (type 5/6) depending on context. Grammar problem type ID:16