自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không tự nhiên; cần trả lời trực tiếp rồi bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (‘I was not’ không phù hợp), dùng cấu trúc đúng như “No, I didn’t” hoặc “No, I didn’t have one.” Thêm 1–2 câu hỗ trợ (lý do, hoàn cảnh, cảm xúc, ví dụ) và dùng liên từ nếu cần để tạo mạch văn.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I usually walked to school because my parents preferred me to be safe, and we lived quite close so walking was convenient.

建议: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng cần được diễn đạt tự nhiên, chính xác ngữ pháp và rõ ràng hơn. Tránh dùng những cụm từ không chính xác như “growing by month by year” và “the electric car is preferring”; thay bằng cụm từ đúng ngữ pháp. Thêm liên từ để kết nối ý (e.g. “because”, “however”) và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể (thống kê nhỏ, thay đổi trong giao thông) để tăng tính thuyết phục. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

示例: I don’t think bicycles are as popular as they used to be. In recent years many people have switched to electric scooters and cars because they are faster and more convenient for commuting. However, bicycles are still common in some rural areas and among people who exercise regularly.

× No, I was not.

✓ No, I didn't.

The student answered a question about possession in the past ('Did you have a bike...'). The correct auxiliary for a past yes/no question is 'did', so the short negative response should be 'No, I didn't.' Using 'I was not' is incorrect because 'was' is the past form of 'to be' and does not match the verb 'have' in the question. Suggestion: use the auxiliary 'did' with the base verb for past simple: 'Yes, I did.' or 'No, I didn't.'

× Well I don't think so because Vietnam is growing by month by year and the electric car is preferring more than bike in Vietnam cause of its convenience.

✓ Well, I don't think so, because Vietnam is developing rapidly month by month, and electric cars are preferred over bikes in Vietnam because of their convenience.

There are multiple issues: 'growing by month by year' is unnatural; use 'developing rapidly' or 'month by month' for gradual change. 'The electric car is preferring' is wrong because 'prefer' is not used in the passive/progressive way; instead say 'electric cars are preferred' or 'people prefer electric cars'. Also use plural 'cars' and 'bikes' for general statements. 'cause' should be replaced by 'because' in formal speech. Suggestions: restructure to 'Vietnam is developing rapidly month by month, and electric cars are preferred over bikes because they are more convenient.'