自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Sửa ngữ pháp và thì (nên dùng thì quá khứ khi nói về quá khứ), loại bỏ từ thừa và lặp từ, và giữ câu ngắn gọn hơn. Cụ thể: dùng 'had' thay vì 'have', 'practised' hoặc 'practiced' ở quá khứ, tránh lặp 'a a', và thay 'become like a racer' bằng cấu trúc tự nhiên hơn như 'felt like a racer'. Nên thêm một câu chi tiết ngắn (ví dụ: nơi bạn thường đi hoặc bạn thích điều gì trên chiếc xe) để làm câu trả lời đầy đủ hơn mà vẫn ngắn gọn.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about eleven. I practised riding it every day and often felt like a little racer. I usually rode around my neighbourhood after school, which was great fun.

建议: Cải thiện tính mạch lạc bằng cách dùng liên từ và chia thì cho đúng; sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'Yes, I do' không cần hoặc phải theo sau bằng một mệnh đề, dùng 'bikes are' thay vì 'bike are', 'I see' hoặc 'I saw' nhất quán ở thì quá khứ/hiện tại). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về lý do và tránh câu mơ hồ như 'around May' nếu không chắc — nếu đề cập thì giải thích ngắn lý do. Ví dụ: nêu những nơi hoặc sự kiện khiến xe đạp phổ biến, hoặc thời tiết vào tháng 5.

示例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country; I see them everywhere in the streets. They become especially common in May because the weather is pleasant and many people enjoy cycling in parks and along rivers.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was about 11 years old.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was about 11 years old.

The sentence incorrectly uses the present tense 'have' while referring to a past time 'when I was about 11 years old'. Use the past tense 'had' to match the time frame. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs for actions or states that happened in the past.

× I practice it every day when I'm a child and I become like a a racer with a a bike.

✓ I practised it every day when I was a child and I became like a racer with a bike.

Multiple tense errors and incorrect continuous form: 'practice' should be past 'practised' to match past time 'when I was a child'; 'I'm a child' should be 'I was a child'; 'become' should be past 'became'. Also remove duplicate articles 'a a'. Suggestion: Keep consistent past tense for related clauses and proofread for duplicated words.

× Yes, I do bike are really popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are really popular in my country.

This sentence mixes an auxiliary 'do' with a noun 'bike' and a verb 'are', causing ungrammatical structure. Use the plural noun 'bikes' as subject and the verb 'are' without 'do'. Suggestion: For simple statements, use Subject + Verb structure (e.g., 'Bikes are popular').

× I saw bikes everywhere on the street.

✓ I saw bikes everywhere on the streets.

'Everywhere on the street' is awkward; with a general observation, plural 'streets' is more natural: 'everywhere on the streets' or simply 'everywhere on the street' could be used in some contexts but 'on the streets' is preferred. Suggestion: Use 'streets' when speaking generally about many locations.

× People ride bike every day around May because my country is really beautiful for riding bikes.

✓ People ride bikes every day around May because my country is really beautiful for riding bikes.

The noun 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' after the verb 'ride' to agree with plural subject 'People'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns after plural subjects when referring to general habitual actions.