自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve tense accuracy, grammar, and naturalness. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense (e.g., “No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.”). Then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., “because” or “so”) and keep it within 3–4 sentences. Correct verb forms: use past simple and present perfect appropriately, and add small details to make the answer more informative.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Because our family lived in a small apartment, there wasn’t enough space to store one, so I usually walked to school. I remember sometimes borrowing a neighbor’s bike at weekends, which was always fun.

建议: Make the answer more precise and natural. Use a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then give specific supporting reasons or examples with linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “however.” Avoid awkward phrasing like “they do, like most people,” and choose appropriate vocabulary (e.g., “motorbikes” or “bicycles”). Keep it concise (2–4 sentences).

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people commute on motorbikes in cities, while bicycles are common in rural areas for errands and going to markets.

× No I don't. I never ride a bike before.

✓ No, I didn't. I never rode a bike when I was a child.

The examiner's question is about the past (when you were a child), so use past tense. 'I don't' is present tense and incorrect here. 'Never ride' is simple present; to express an action that did not happen in the past, use simple past: 'didn't' and 'never rode'. Also add a comma after 'No' for natural speech punctuation and replace 'before' with 'when I was a child' to match the time reference. Suggestion: Use simple past for past time references (didn't + base verb or simple past verb) and include clear time markers.

× I think so. They do, like most people, ride heavy bikes.

✓ I think so. Yes, many people ride heavy bikes.

The original has awkward phrasing. 'They do, like most people, ride heavy bikes' mixes emphatic 'do' with a parenthetical causing unnatural word order. The tense (present simple) is acceptable for general statements. Simplify to 'many people ride heavy bikes' or 'most people ride heavy bikes'. Avoid unnecessary 'do' unless used for emphasis: 'They do ride heavy bikes' would be correct but still awkward with the parenthetical. Suggestion: Use straightforward subject-verb-object order for general facts: 'Many/Most people ride heavy bikes.'