自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammar, tense consistency, and provide a fuller answer. The student used present tense (“don't have”) for a past-time question. Give a direct topic sentence in past tense, then one or two supporting details (brief) using linking words. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences).

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked or took public transportation to visit friends and go to school, so I didn’t learn to ride much.

建议: Make the response more direct and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., because, for example, also). Correct tense and grammar, avoid redundant phrasing, and be more specific about where and why bikes are popular.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in the Philippines because many families use them for recreation and short trips. For example, when I was a child I often went to the park and saw lots of kids riding bikes with their parents, and some neighbourhoods also have cycle lanes which encourages cycling.

× No, I don't have a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student must use past tense. 'Don't have' is present tense and also mismatches time reference. Use the past simple negative 'didn't have'. Suggestion: Match verb tense to the time frame in the question; for past situations use 'did/didn't + base verb'.

× I believe that bikes are popular in my country, specifically here in the Philippines because a lot of when I was a child, I usually go to the park and sometimes I saw a lot of kids riding a bike with their parents.

✓ I believe that bikes are popular in my country, especially here in the Philippines, because when I was a child I usually went to the park and sometimes I saw many kids riding bikes with their parents.

This sentence has several issues: incorrect word order and unnecessary words ('a lot of when I was a child'), mixed tenses (present 'believe' is fine for opinion, but events describing childhood should be past: 'go' should be 'went'), incorrect quantifier and noun form ('a lot of' misuse and 'a lot of kids' or 'many kids' is correct), and plural agreement for 'bikes' and 'riding bikes'. Fixes: remove extraneous phrase, place 'when I was a child' directly after the clause it modifies, change 'go' to past 'went', change 'a lot of' to 'many' or 'a lot of kids', and use plural 'bikes' or 'riding bikes'. Suggestion: Break long sentences into clearer parts, keep the main opinion in present tense and describe past experiences with past tense. Use correct quantifiers ('many' or 'a lot of') and plural nouns for general counts.