自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: The student simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence, add one or two brief supporting details using a linking word, and keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). For example, state whether you had a bike, describe it briefly or say how often you used it, and optionally give a short reason or memory.

示例: Yes, I had a small red bike when I was about seven. I rode it to my friend’s house almost every day, which helped me become more confident on the road. Because the neighbourhood was quiet, my parents felt comfortable letting me cycle alone.

建议: The answer is vague and lacks development. To improve, give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example", "however"). Keep it natural and concise, and use more precise vocabulary (e.g., "common", "widely used", "popular among").

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities, because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or to run errands, and there are growing bike lanes in major towns.

× Yeah, I guess so, but I'm not that so sure.

✓ Yeah, I guess so, but I'm not that sure.

The phrase 'that so sure' is ungrammatical because 'so' is redundant when 'that' already modifies 'sure'. This is an issue with adverb usage (placement/redundancy). Use either 'that sure' or 'so sure', but the common natural form is 'that sure' or better 'not so sure'. Suggested improvements: say 'I'm not that sure' or 'I'm not so sure'.