自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng nhưng còn một vài điểm cần cải thiện: (1) Tránh tiếng ồn (uh) hoặc ngập ngừng; (2) Mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn rồi bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể; (3) Dùng liên từ để nối ý mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ (ví dụ "own my bike" và "ride by myself" lặp ý). Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ tuổi hoặc lý do an toàn) sẽ làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

示例: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. My parents thought I was too young—I was only five—so they were worried I might fall and get hurt. As a result, they preferred I learn to balance on a scooter first before riding a bicycle.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính nhưng chứa lỗi phát âm/ chính tả ("buys" thay vì "bikes"), nhiều ngập ngừng và cấu trúc chưa hoàn chỉnh. Cần: (1) Sử dụng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng; (2) Trình bày lý do cụ thể và ví dụ; (3) Dùng liên từ (for example, because, therefore) để nối ý; (4) Tránh ngập ngừng và hoàn thiện kết thúc câu.

示例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer motorbikes for daily travel. Motorbikes are faster and more convenient in traffic, so people usually use them to commute to work or go out with friends. For example, in my neighborhood almost everyone rides a scooter rather than a bike.

× So that's why my parents didn't allow me to own my bike and ride by myself.

✓ So that's why my parents didn't allow me to own a bike or ride it by myself.

The original sentence uses 'my bike' which implies ownership that contradicts 'didn't allow me to own'; using 'a bike' or 'it' is clearer. Also 'and ride by myself' is better as 'or ride it by myself' to reflect alternatives. Suggestion: use 'a bike' when referring to an item not owned and use a pronoun ('it') to avoid repetition.

× From my perspective, I don't think buys are popular in my country because my country's main transportation is motorbike and people tend to ride motorbike uh to go to walk or hang out because of uh.

✓ From my perspective, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because the main means of transportation is motorbikes and people tend to ride motorbikes to go to work or hang out.

Several noun number errors: 'buys' is a misspelling of 'bikes' and should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally. 'Motorbike' should be plural 'motorbikes' when referring generally, and 'main transportation' is unnatural; use 'the main means of transportation'. Also 'to go to walk' is incorrect; likely 'to go to work' or 'to go for a walk'—context suggests 'work'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and choose appropriate collocations such as 'means of transportation' and 'go to work' or 'go for a walk'.