自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 질문을 그대로 반복하는 것은 답변이 아닙니다. 질문에 직접적으로 응답하는 주제 문장을 제시하고, 필요하면 한두 문장으로 구체적 정보를 덧붙이세요. 예를 들어 언제부터 가졌는지, 어떻게 사용했는지, 특별한 기억이 있는지를 연결어를 사용해 설명하면 좋습니다.

示例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven, and I used it to ride to a nearby park almost every day. Because my neighborhood was quiet and safe, I quickly became confident riding without training wheels.

建议: 질문을 반복하지 말고 명확한 의견을 먼저 밝히세요. 그 다음 이유와 구체적 예시를 덧붙여 논리적으로 전개하세요. 연결어(For example, However, Because)를 사용해 인구 통계나 도시 구조, 교통 문제 등 관련 근거를 제시하면 설득력이 높아집니다.

示例: I think bikes are fairly popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For instance, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and rental schemes, although in rural areas cars remain more common.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's response repeated the examiner's question, creating a sentence structure error because it lacks an appropriate answer. For the past-tense question 'Did you have...?', respond with a past tense statement: 'Yes, I had...' or 'No, I didn’t have...'. Provide additional detail if needed (e.g., 'Yes, I had a blue bike when I was a child.').

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. For a present-tense question using 'Do you think...', use a present-tense response like 'Yes, I think...' or 'No, I don't think...'. You can expand with reasons (e.g., 'Yes, I think bikes are popular because many people use them for short trips.').