教师— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevap doğrudan ve açık olmalı; dilbilgisi ve sözdizimi hatalarını düzeltin. Kısa ve bağlı cümleler kullanın, gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın ve istatistik öğretmeninizle ilgili nedenleri daha spesifik verin. Bağlaçlar (because, so, however) kullanarak cümleleri anlamlı şekilde bağlayın.

示例: My favorite teacher is my university statistics lecturer. Although many students dislike statistics, I appreciate her clear explanations and practical examples. Because of her guidance, I improved my understanding and exam results.

建议: Duyguyu açıkça belirtin ve kısa bir neden verin. 'Numerous' yerine daha doğal ifadeler kullanın (large groups, many people). Gereksiz tekrarları önleyin ve bağlaçla neden-sonuç ilişkisi kurun.

示例: No, I don't want to be a teacher. I have social anxiety, so speaking in front of large groups makes me very uncomfortable. Therefore, I prefer jobs with limited public interaction.

建议: Zamanları ve tanımlamaları doğru kullanın (was, used to be). 'Angry' yerine daha doğal betimlemeler kullanın (strict, strict about discipline). Neden hatırladığınızı ve bir örnek verin, bağlaçlarla açıklamayı güçlendirin.

示例: Yes, I remember my first-grade Turkish reading teacher. She was quite strict because students were often lazy, and this made her enforce rules firmly. I remember her lessons because they helped me learn discipline and reading habits.

建议: Daha doğal ve akıcı cevaplayın; 'I only remember one teacher' yeterli. Gereksiz tekrar ve dolgu kelimelerinden (uh, as I mentioned) kaçının. Ayrıca kısa bir neden veya duygu ekleyin (lost contact, moved away) ve bağlaç kullanın.

示例: No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teachers. I only remember one of them because we lost contact after I moved and I never kept in touch with the others.

建议: Olayı kronolojik ve doğru dilbilgisi ile anlatın. İngilizcede doğru fiil yapıları ve zamirleri kullanın. 'Make fun of me' ve 'she helped me by asking them to stop' gibi net sonuçlar verin. Bağlaçlarla neden-sonuç ilişkisi oluşturun.

示例: Once four students made fun of me in class, so I told my teacher. She intervened and asked them to stop, which made me feel safer and helped me focus on my studies.

建议: Karşılaştırmada doğru yapı kullanın ('prefer high school teachers to primary school teachers'). 'Cozy' yerine daha uygun sıfatlar kullanın (approachable, supportive). Cümleyi tek seferde ve akıcı bağlaçla verin, gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın.

示例: No, I prefer my high school teachers to my primary school teachers because they were more approachable and supportive, which made learning more enjoyable.

× Yeah, my favorite teacher is in my university statistics teacher, but 90% of students don't like statistic teacher.

✓ Yeah, my favorite teacher at my university is my statistics teacher, but 90% of students don't like the statistics teacher.

The sentence has article errors and word order problems. Use 'at my university' instead of 'in my university'. Include a possessive or determiner before 'statistics teacher' ('my statistics teacher' and 'the statistics teacher'). Also use the plural form 'statistics' as part of the course name. Suggestion: say 'my favorite teacher at my university is my statistics teacher' and '90% of students don't like the statistics teacher.'

× Because they are, their results are bad.

✓ Because they are lazy, their results are bad.

The original fragment 'Because they are,' is incomplete and unclear. The intended idea is that students are lazy, which causes poor results. This is a sentence structure and subject reference issue. Complete the clause with the adjective 'lazy' to make it grammatically correct: 'Because they are lazy, their results are bad.'

× Certainly not. I have social anxiety. Standing over a numerous people is a bad experience for me.

✓ Certainly not. I have social anxiety. Standing in front of numerous people is a bad experience for me.

Preposition choice and noun phrasing are wrong. Use 'standing in front of' rather than 'standing over', and 'numerous people' (no article) rather than 'a numerous people'. Suggestion: 'Standing in front of numerous people...' improves preposition and noun usage.

× Yes, I remember my Turkish reading teacher when I was in the first class.

✓ Yes, I remember my Turkish reading teacher from when I was in first grade.

The phrase 'in the first class' is unnatural for grade level; use 'in first grade' or 'when I was in first grade'. This is a tense/context phrasing issue. 'From when' clarifies the time reference.

× The teacher is very angry in the class because students are very lazy.

✓ The teacher was very strict in the class because the students were very lazy.

Using 'angry' to describe a habitual teacher behaviour is less appropriate; 'strict' or 'strict with the class' fits better. Also tense should match past context: use 'was' and 'were'. Add 'the' before 'students' to indicate a specific group.

× No, I only remember, uh, one teacher. I don't remember other teachers. As I mentioned previous question.

✓ No, I only remember one teacher. I don't remember the other teachers, as I mentioned in the previous question.

Missing determiners and preposition: use 'the other teachers' and 'in the previous question'. Also combine fragments into one sentence for clarity.

× Once other four students in the class make fun of with me and I say this to UH, I remember teacher and she helps me.

✓ Once four other students in the class made fun of me, and I told the teacher. I remember that she helped me.

Multiple errors: tense should be past 'made', preposition 'make fun of me' (no 'with'), word order 'four other students', and reporting 'I told the teacher' is clearer. Use past tense consistently: 'made' and 'helped.'

× She get a get away from other students from me.

✓ She helped me get away from the other students.

Original has incorrect verb forms and word order. Use past tense 'helped' and correct infinitive structure 'helped me get away from the other students.' Also include 'the' before 'other students.'

× Do you like your primary school teachers more than your high school teachers?

✓ Do you like your primary school teachers more than your high school teachers?

This question sentence is fine; no correction needed. If intended comparison needs clarity, ask 'Do you prefer your primary school teachers to your high school teachers?'. No grammatical quantifier error present.

× Absolutely not. I like my high school teachers mostly than primary school teachers because. Because high school teachers are, uh, cozy in the class.

✓ Absolutely not. I prefer my high school teachers to my primary school teachers because high school teachers are more approachable in class.

Several problems: 'mostly than' is incorrect comparative structure — use 'prefer ... to ...' or 'more than.' Remove the sentence fragment 'because.' 'Cozy' is not the right adjective for teachers; use 'approachable' or 'friendly.' Combine into one coherent sentence and use correct comparative form 'more approachable.'