整洁— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is natural, relevant and well-structured with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail. To improve further, reduce redundancy (avoid repeating similar ideas like ‘neat and organized’), add one brief specific example and use a linking word to contrast the exception (e.g., however). Keep it to 2–3 sentences total.

示例: Yes, I do. I feel much more focused when my room and desk are organized; for example, I always put my notebooks and pens back after studying. However, when I'm extremely busy I sometimes leave things out for a day or two.

建议: Good direct response and specific supporting details. To improve, correct a small grammatical mistake (“I've go grown older” → “I've grown older”) and use a linking word to show change (e.g., “however” or “since then”). Keep answers concise (3–4 sentences) and add a short reason why you changed habits.

示例: Not really — when I was a child I often left books, clothes and toys on the floor and my parents had to remind me to tidy up. Since then I've become more organized because I learned it saves time and reduces stress.

建议: The answer begins well but contains hesitations, an unclear word (“sessionally”), and an unfinished sentence about digital files. To improve, remove filler sounds, complete the thought about digital files (e.g., “organize my digital files into folders”), and use linking words (e.g., “then” or “also”). Aim for 2–3 clear sentences.

示例: I keep only the essentials on my desk, such as my laptop and notebooks, and I clear away any unnecessary papers after studying. I also organize my digital files into clearly named folders so I can find documents quickly.

建议: Strong, natural answer with a clear opinion and specific reasons. To get even higher, vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., use “essential” or “beneficial”) and add a short example or brief exception with a linking phrase like “for example” or “however”. Keep within 2–3 sentences for conciseness.

示例: Yes, I think being tidy is essential, especially when studying, because it helps me concentrate and saves time—for example, I can start work immediately without searching for my notes. However, it doesn't need to be perfectly neat all the time.

× As I've go grown older, though, I've become much more organized.

✓ As I've grown older, though, I've become much more organized.

The phrase contains an incorrect extra verb 'go'. This is a present perfect construction ('I have grown older'), so 'grown' should directly follow 'have' without 'go'. Remove 'go' to form the correct present perfect: 'I have grown older.' Suggestion: remember that 'have' + past participle expresses an action or change up to now; do not insert another verb between them.

× I try to keep only the essentials on my desk, such as my laptop, notebooks and uh, sessionally.

✓ I try to keep only the essentials on my desk, such as my laptop, notebooks and, uh, stationery.

The word 'sessionally' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation or wrong word choice. The intended noun is 'stationery' (writing materials), which fits the list of desk essentials. Use the correct noun 'stationery' and place commas properly. Suggestion: choose vocabulary that matches the category (desk items) and check spelling.

× I also make sure my digital files or.

✓ I also make sure my digital files are organized.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb and object complement. It appears to start a comparison or list but stops at 'or.' To complete the idea, add a verb phrase such as 'are organized' to parallel earlier points about tidiness. Suggestion: ensure each sentence has a subject and a verb and clearly completes the thought before ending.

× Did you use to keep your room tidy as a child?

✓ Did you use to keep your room tidy when you were a child?

The original question is understandable but 'as a child' is acceptable; however 'Did you use to' is informal; more standard is 'Did you used to' for past habitual actions in questions, though many speakers use 'use to'. The standard form is 'Did you use d to' with 'did' already marking past, so the base 'use' is correct: 'Did you use to...'? To avoid confusion and be clearer, 'when you were a child' is a natural alternative. Suggestion: use 'Did you use to' or rephrase to 'When you were a child, did you keep your room tidy?'