整洁— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevap doğal fakat dağınık. Konuya doğrudan başlayıp bağlantı ve özgül örnekler ekleyerek netlik sağlayın. Gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın, bağlaçlar kullanarak neden ve etkilerini belirtin (ör. “because”, “so”, “however”). Cümle sayısını 3–4 ile sınırlayın ve daha uygun kelime seçimi kullanın (ör. “tidy person” yerine “tidy”).

示例: I like the idea of keeping things tidy, but I’m not very good at it. Because I find it hard to concentrate on chores, I often leave my desk and home untidy. However, I try to tidy small areas once a week so the mess doesn’t get too bad.

建议: Cevap kararsız ve tekrarlı. Geçmiş zaman sorularında daha kesin ifadeler verin veya net bir belirsizlik belirtin. Tekrarlardan kaçının, dilbilgisi olarak “used to” yapılarını doğru kullanın ve kısa bir neden ekleyin (ör. “because I liked order”). Cümleleri 2–3 ile sınırlayın.

示例: I don’t remember exactly because I shared a room, but I used to try to keep my things organized. As a child I liked things to be neat, so I would tidy my toys and books when I had time.

× Actually I like but I can't, I'm not that tidy, tidy person.

✓ Actually I would like to, but I can't; I'm not that tidy a person.

The original is missing a clear object after 'like' and has awkward word order. Use 'would like to' to express desire. 'That tidy a person' is the correct idiomatic phrasing in English. Also add punctuation to separate clauses.

× Umm, I can't focus on the to do things, so I can't tidy things around the home, my home, my house, my desk or anything else.

✓ I can't focus on the things I have to do, so I can't tidy the house, my desk, or anything else.

'the to do things' is incorrect word order; use 'the things I have to do' or 'the things to do'. Repeating 'home, my home, my house' is redundant; choose one noun. Use parallel structure ('tidy the house, my desk, or anything else').

× So I'm not, but I want to.

✓ So I'm not, but I want to be.

The sentence ends with an incomplete verb phrase. 'I want to' should be followed by the base verb 'be' to complete the idea: 'I want to be (tidy)'.

× Probably I would, but I didn't have any room on my own so I don't know.

✓ I probably would have, but I didn't have a room of my own, so I'm not sure.

When referring to a habitual past action that may have been prevented by circumstances, use 'would have' for hypothetical past. 'Any room on my own' is unnatural; use 'a room of my own'. Maintain past tense consistency: 'didn't have' and 'I'm not sure' can be 'so I'm not sure' to express current uncertainty about the past.

× I'm not sure, but probably I would because I was a very strict person when I was a child.

✓ I'm not sure, but I probably would have been, because I was very strict when I was a child.

The clause refers to a past hypothetical (whether the student kept the room tidy), so use 'would have been' rather than 'would'. 'A very strict person' can be shortened to 'very strict'. Keep tense consistent for past reference.

× I've I've loved to do things and like perfectly.

✓ I've always loved doing things perfectly.

Use 'loved doing' or 'loved to do' consistently; 'loved doing' followed by the -ing form is natural. 'And like perfectly' is ungrammatical; 'always' clarifies frequency and 'doing things perfectly' is the correct phrase.

× Is there any?

✓ Is there anything else?

'Is there any?' is incomplete and unidiomatic. Use 'Is there anything else?' to ask if the examiner has another question or point. 'Anything else' is the correct collocation.