视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi đưa 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại cảnh bạn thích, mục đích chụp). Dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" hợp lý để nối ý. Giữ độ dài dưới 5 câu và dùng từ vựng phù hợp (remind, capture, scenery, memory).

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me capture memories of places I visit. For example, I often photograph coastal sunsets and mountain landscapes to remember their colors and atmosphere. This also motivates me to revisit those places and share the scenes with my friends.

建议: Cải thiện: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (singular/plural, word forms) và tránh lặp. Bắt đầu với câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I prefer rural views) rồi nêu lý do cụ thể, dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "as". Thêm một ví dụ ngắn để minh họa (a specific place or element).

示例: I prefer rural views because they are greener and fresher, with mountains and rivers creating a peaceful atmosphere. For instance, I enjoy visiting a nearby valley where the air is fresh and I can hear birds, which makes me feel relaxed and connected to nature.

建议: Cải thiện: Cần cấu trúc rõ ràng và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp/diễn đạt lủng củng. Nên trả lời trực tiếp (I prefer both), sau đó phân tích ngắn hai lý do rõ ràng: cảm giác quen thuộc ở trong nước và khám phá ở nước ngoài. Tránh lẫn lộn đại từ và dùng từ vựng chính xác (feel at home, explore, cultures, landscapes).

示例: I prefer both views in my own country and abroad. At home, familiar landscapes make me feel comfortable and nostalgic; for example, visiting my hometown's lake always feels reassuring. Abroad, I enjoy discovering different cultures and landscapes, such as exotic mountains or coastal scenes that I haven't seen before.

× Yes, yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I love watching a very because I think it is very good and it could remind me of the place that I go to.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I enjoy looking at them; I think it is very nice and it can remind me of the places I have visited.

Use consistent present simple tense for habits and general statements. Remove duplicated words and correct awkward phrasing: 'watching' is replaced by 'looking at' when referring to pictures; 'a very' is incomplete and removed; 'could' changed to 'can' for general ability; 'the place that I go to' corrected to 'the places I have visited' to express past visits remembered in present.

× Also, it makes me feel like when I take a picture, I could always remember that area that I go and then I could know that the landscape how beautiful.

✓ Also, when I take a picture, I can always remember the area I visited and appreciate how beautiful the landscape is.

Reorder the sentence for clarity and proper English structure. Use present simple modal 'can' for general ability, replace 'that I go' with 'I visited' or 'I have visited', and change 'know that the landscape how beautiful' to 'appreciate how beautiful the landscape is' to form a correct clause.

× I prefer views in rural area because in rural area I could feel it more greener, feel greener, fresher and the landscape there got mountains, rivers and it is more con.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because in rural areas I feel they are greener and fresher, and the landscape has mountains and rivers.

Use plural 'rural areas' for general category. Remove unnecessary modal 'could' and use present simple 'feel'. 'More greener' is incorrect (double comparative) so use 'greener' alone. 'Got' is colloquial; use 'has'. 'con' seems to be incomplete and removed.

× I feel more connected with the nature.

✓ I feel more connected with nature.

Do not use the definite article 'the' before 'nature' in this general sense; say 'connected with nature'.

× To me every country got a very beautiful views, so I prefer both of them in my own country.

✓ To me, every country has very beautiful views, so I like both views in my own country and abroad.

Replace colloquial 'got' with 'has' for present simple. 'A very beautiful views' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'very beautiful views'. Clarify meaning by saying 'both... in my own country and abroad'.

× I prefer them because in my own country I could feeling like I am at home and I feel very connected in other country.

✓ I prefer them because in my own country I feel at home, and in other countries I feel very connected as well.

Correct verb forms: use 'feel' instead of 'could feeling'. Use plural 'other countries' for general meaning. Ensure parallel structure 'in my own country... and in other countries...'.

× I prefer you there because I could learn new things, new people, new mountains and new rivers.

✓ I prefer going to other countries because I can learn about new things, meet new people, and see new mountains and rivers.

'I prefer you there' is incorrect pronoun/reference; change to 'going to other countries'. Use 'can' for general ability instead of 'could'. Use verbs 'learn about', 'meet', 'see' to properly collocate with objects.