视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác. Nên nêu lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ ngắn. Giữ 2–4 câu, dùng liên từ đơn giản khi cần nối ý.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I prefer landscapes because they help me capture peaceful moments and remember places I visited. For example, I often photograph sunsets by the river to keep the memory of my travels.

建议: Câu trả lời tốt nhưng cần chính xác ngữ pháp và cấu trúc ngắn gọn hơn. Bắt đầu bằng câu trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích ngắn và nêu ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh từ thừa như 'you know' và sửa các lỗi số ít/ số nhiều.

示例: I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy the peaceful atmosphere and natural scenery. For instance, I like walking through fields and taking photos of farms, which helps me relax and recharge.

建议: Cần trả lời rõ ràng: chọn một ý chính hoặc nói cả hai nhưng có lý do rõ ràng. Tránh tiếng lòng và sửa ngữ pháp (my country has, other countries). Nên nêu lý do cụ thể cho mỗi lựa chọn và kết luận ngắn.

示例: I like views in my own country because it has many beautiful landscapes I know well. However, I also want to see views in other countries to experience different cultures and learn new languages.

× Umm honestly I'm a best fan of photographer photography so umm to to between taking picture of people and different view.

✓ Umm honestly I'm a big fan of photography, so when choosing between taking pictures of people and different views,

'a best fan' is incorrect; use 'a big fan' or 'the biggest fan'. 'photographer photography' is redundant; 'photography' suffices. 'taking picture' needs plural 'pictures'. 'different view' should be 'different views'. Also fix word order and articles for natural English.

× I rather like to taking picture of different sleep feel because it is a good point to to help me keep my.

✓ I would rather like taking pictures of peaceful scenes because it helps me relax and keep calm.

After 'rather' use 'would rather' or 'prefer' and follow with base verb or gerund correctly; 'to taking' is wrong. 'picture' should be plural 'pictures'. 'sleep feel' is unclear; 'peaceful scenes' or 'calm atmosphere' is appropriate. 'to help me keep my' is incomplete; changed to 'helps me relax and keep calm'.

× Yes, from my point of view, I prefer views in rural area because, you know, I'm very into the peaceful atmosphere.

✓ Yes, from my point of view, I prefer views in rural areas because, you know, I'm very into the peaceful atmosphere.

Use plural 'rural areas' when speaking generally. Preposition 'in' is fine, but noun should match plurality. This keeps subject general and natural.

× So in the rural area is more suitable for me and if I have an opportunity I will go to the countryside.

✓ So the countryside is more suitable for me, and if I have the opportunity I will go there.

Original sentence has awkward structure and article use. 'in the rural area is more suitable' lacks clear subject; revised to 'the countryside is more suitable'. Use 'the opportunity' for a specific chance and 'go there' for clarity.

× MMM Oh yes, I think I will suit both this time.

✓ Mm, oh yes, I think I would enjoy both.

'I will suit both' is incorrect; 'suit' is not used this way. Use 'I would enjoy both' or 'both would suit me'. Determine modal 'would' for hypothetical preference.

× Uh, instead of my country, do you know my country also have a lot of beautiful landscape, But if I am now, I'm studying language, so I also want to visit other country.

✓ Uh, besides my country, you know my country also has a lot of beautiful landscapes, but right now I'm studying a language, so I also want to visit other countries.

'Instead of' is wrong here; use 'besides'. Subject-verb agreement: 'my country also have' should be 'has'. 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes'. 'If I am now' is incorrect; use 'right now'. 'studying language' needs an article: 'a language' or 'studying languages'. 'other country' should be plural 'other countries' when speaking generally.