视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (use correct verb forms and articles) and avoid redundancy.

示例: I sometimes prefer to look at a view rather than take a photo because photos don’t capture the atmosphere. For example, when I stand on a mountain I like to listen to the wind and enjoy the silence, so I keep my camera in my bag.

建议: Answer directly (urban or rural), then give clear, specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (agreement, articles) and reduce repetition. Mention one or two concrete details or examples.

示例: I prefer rural views because they are usually quieter and more relaxing. For instance, countryside villages often have peaceful walking paths and local food stalls where you can try traditional dishes without the noise of the city.

建议: Give a direct answer (own country or other countries) and explain with specific, coherent reasons using linking words. Remove hesitations, correct vocabulary (e.g., 'rural', 'trails'), and finish sentences fully. Provide an explicit example showing why you prefer other countries.

示例: I prefer views in other countries because many places abroad offer more green space and well-marked hiking trails. For example, I enjoy hiking in national parks overseas where trails are maintained and maps are available, which makes the experience more enjoyable.

× Now really sometimes I prefer watch the view or the scenery directly rather than take a photo because I cannot feel the atmosphere after looking photo.

✓ Now, actually, sometimes I prefer watching the view or the scenery directly rather than taking a photo because I cannot feel the atmosphere after looking at a photo.

The verbs after 'prefer' require the -ing form when expressing a general preference (Grammar Problem Type 8). Also 'looking photo' is incorrect: the verb 'look' when followed by an object meaning 'view something' requires the preposition 'at' (Grammar Problem Type 11) and needs an article before 'photo' (Grammar Problem Type 22). Suggestions: use 'prefer watching' and 'rather than taking a photo'; change 'looking photo' to 'looking at a photo' and add necessary articles.'

× I like Lorna area of the view because most of the time they make people feel comfortable and relaxing also and it make people feel no stress and can have different type of local food in that place.

✓ I like rural areas because most of the time they make people feel comfortable and relaxed, and they do not cause stress; you can also try different types of local food there.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun use and agreement: 'it make' should agree with plural subject 'they' (Grammar Problem Type 27/12). 'Relaxing' is used as an adjective but 'relaxed' better describes how people feel (Grammar Problem Type 13). 'Different type' needs plural 'types' (Grammar Problem Type 14). 'Lorna area of the view' seems incorrect word choice; likely 'rural areas' fits the question. Suggestions: use consistent plural subjects and verbs ('they make' -> 'they make' or 'they do'), change adjectives to correct form ('relaxed'), and use plural quantifiers ('different types').

× I prefer other countries runder view because, uh, most of play most of the time they have different. They have more green space and more trial for tourists.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because most of the time they have more green space and more trails for tourists.

'Prefer' should be followed by a noun phrase or -ing form; 'other countries runder view' is unclear—use 'views in other countries' (Grammar Problem Type 8). 'Trial' is the wrong noun; the correct word is 'trails' (spelling and word choice). Also remove filler words and repeated fragments. Suggestions: say 'I prefer views in other countries' and use plural 'trails'.

× For example, I really enjoy hiking so I can enjoy in my I can enjoy.

✓ For example, I really enjoy hiking, so I can enjoy nature when I travel.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive, lacking a clear object and correct structure (Grammar Problem Type 26). 'I can enjoy in my I can enjoy' is ungrammatical repetition. Suggestions: complete the idea with a clear object such as 'nature' and connect clauses properly with 'so' or 'so that'.'