视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy and fix errors (e.g., "that I have been alive" → "I've experienced"; remove extra "I").

示例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often capture sunsets and cityscapes because they remind me of special moments; moreover, these photos help me remember places I've visited in the past.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence and then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar and number agreement ("rural areas is" → "rural areas are") and avoid repetition.

示例: I prefer views in rural areas. Because I live in a busy city, rural landscapes make me feel more relaxed and peaceful, and I especially like quiet fields and mountain scenery, which I rarely get to visit.

建议: Respond directly and then provide a specific reason or example with linking words. Improve phrasing ("I still don't have the chance" → "I haven't had the chance") and avoid vague statements by mentioning particular places or features.

示例: I prefer views in my own country. Since I was born in Taiwan, I haven't had time to see all its natural spots, such as Taroko Gorge and Sun Moon Lake, so I want to explore more of those beautiful places.

× I like to take pictures of different views in my life.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views in my life.

Using 'like' with a verb can take either the infinitive ('to take') or the gerund ('taking'). In natural spoken English when referring to general preferences, the gerund is more common: 'I like taking pictures.' Use the gerund to emphasize the activity as a hobby or ongoing preference.

× I like to capture the moment that I have been alive and I for me, I think it is a memory that I can remember after a few years.

✓ I like to capture moments from my life because, for me, they are memories I can remember years later.

The original sentence has redundant and awkward phrasing ('the moment that I have been alive', 'I for me') and incorrect tense use ('have been alive' is unnecessary). Simplify and reorder: use plural 'moments' to match context, use 'from my life' for clarity, and 'they are memories I can remember years later' to express future recollection. This fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× For me, rural areas is a place that I can feel more relaxed and I won't have that much chances to go there.

✓ For me, rural areas are places where I can feel more relaxed, and I don't have many chances to go there.

'Rural areas' is plural, so use plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement). 'A place' is singular and mismatches; change to 'places' or rephrase. 'I won't have that much chances' is ungrammatical: use 'I don't have many chances' or 'I don't have many opportunities.' Also use 'where' instead of 'that' for locations.

× So I prefer the views of rural areas.

✓ So I prefer the views of rural areas.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable as written; no change needed. It correctly uses 'prefer' with the subject 'I' (no third-person singular). Included to show review: no error found under the listed categories.

× Although I was born in Taiwan, I still don't have the chance to see all the natural views.

✓ Although I was born in Taiwan, I still haven't had the chance to see all the natural sights.

'Don't have the chance' is acceptable but 'haven't had the chance' fits better with past-to-present context (experiences up to now). 'Natural views' is not the best collocation; 'natural sights' or 'natural scenery' is more natural. Use present perfect 'haven't had' to express experiences so far.

× For me, Taiwan is a very beautiful island and it is the place that I would want to see more.

✓ For me, Taiwan is a very beautiful island and it is a place I would like to see more of.

'Would want to see more' is awkward; use 'would like to see more of' or 'I would like to see more of it.' Also 'the place that' is unnecessary; 'a place' is sufficient. The correction uses natural phrasing and proper preposition 'of' after 'see more'.