视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện ngữ pháp, trật tự câu và rõ ràng ý chính. Nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu giải thích cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và dùng từ đúng (ví dụ: “views”, “photo of”, “feel relaxed”, “discover new things”). Luyện phát âm từ nối và chia câu để ý nghĩa rõ ràng.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different views. It helps me feel relaxed and lets me discover new places and details I might have otherwise missed.

建议: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu và lí do cụ thể, tránh nói lặp và sự không chính xác về ngữ pháp. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu khẳng định rõ ràng (I prefer…), sau đó nêu 2 lý do ngắn gọn với từ nối (because/so) và một ví dụ cụ thể. Chú ý động từ phù hợp (e.g., “makes me feel relaxed”).

示例: I prefer urban views because the city atmosphere is lively and makes me feel relaxed. Also, it's easy to meet people there, so I can ask for directions or talk with locals when I need help.

建议: Cải thiện độ rõ ràng và mạch lạc: trả lời trực tiếp (I prefer...), giải thích lý do cụ thể và đưa ví dụ. Tránh tiếng lắp, dùng kết cấu câu đúng (e.g., “because I’ve already visited many places at home” / “I want to explore different cultures and landmarks”). Rèn luyện cách diễn đạt mong muốn du lịch và nêu ví dụ địa điểm cụ thể.

示例: I prefer views in other countries because I've already visited many places in my own country. I want to explore different cultures and see famous landmarks abroad, such as canals in Amsterdam or historic streets in Prague.

× Yes, I really like to take a lot of photos are different views because when I take what photo I have, I can travel one the new plane and can make me relax and have new no new things.

✓ Yes, I really like to take a lot of photos of different views because when I take photos, I feel like I can travel to new places; it relaxes me and lets me experience new things.

The sentence has multiple sentence structure and word usage issues: 'photos are different views' should be 'photos of different views' (preposition error), 'what photo I have' is ungrammatical and should be 'photos' or 'a photo', 'travel one the new plane' is incorrect and should be 'travel to new places' (preposition and word choice), and 'can make me relax and have new no new things' should be 'it relaxes me and lets me experience new things' (subject-verb agreement and word order). Revise by breaking into clearer clauses, using correct prepositions, and using appropriate verbs like 'feel', 'relaxes', and 'experience'.

× I would prefer in urban areas because it's so friendly and uh it make me have emotion it relax and I can talk with people because my urban area is so friendly and they can help me when I have problem.

✓ I would prefer urban areas because they are so friendly; they make me feel relaxed and I can talk with people because my urban area is friendly and they can help me when I have a problem.

Errors include incorrect use of 'prefer in urban areas' (remove 'in'), subject-verb agreement 'it make' should be 'they make' (plural subject), and awkward phrase 'make me have emotion it relax' should be 'make me feel relaxed'. Also add the article 'a' in 'have a problem'. Improve by matching plural subjects with plural verbs, using 'feel' + adjective for emotions, and removing unnecessary fillers.

× I prefer view in, uh, other country because in my country I have, uh, go to travel to a lot of places and I want to go around the world to travel new flight and her canal in in the other country have what this in this?

✓ I prefer views in other countries because in my country I have already traveled to many places, and I want to travel around the world to see new places, attractions and cultures in other countries.

This sentence is disorganized and contains many errors: 'I prefer view in, uh, other country' should be 'I prefer views in other countries' (plural and preposition), 'I have, uh, go to travel to a lot of places' should be 'I have already traveled to many places' (tense and word choice), and the latter fragment about 'new flight and her canal' is unclear — replace with 'see new places, attractions and cultures'. Fix by using correct plural forms, past participle for completed actions ('have traveled'), and clear noun phrases for what the speaker wants to experience.