视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Bạn đã lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời. Cần trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ ngắn gọn. Sử dụng liên từ khi cần để nối ý và tránh dài dòng.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset because the light creates dramatic colors, and I sometimes capture coastal landscapes when I travel to relax and preserve memories.

建议: Câu trả lời không liên quan và có lỗi ngữ nghĩa (‘jewelries’ không đúng ngữ cảnh). Bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp (urban hoặc rural), giải thích lý do và thêm một ví dụ cụ thể. Dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'so' để liên kết ý.

示例: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more natural, which helps me relax. For instance, I like photographing rolling hills and small farms, so I can capture peaceful scenes that contrast with busy city life.

建议: Bạn lại lặp câu hỏi và có lỗi ngữ pháp (‘on in the countries’). Trả lời trực tiếp (own country, other countries, or both), nêu lý do cụ thể và đưa một ví dụ ngắn. Giữ câu trả lời tự nhiên, tối đa 4–5 câu, dùng liên từ để mạch lạc.

示例: I prefer views both in my own country and abroad because each offers different cultural scenery. For example, local landscapes remind me of home traditions, while views in other countries expose me to new architecture and natural features that inspire my photography.

× Do you like taking pictures of different views?

✓ Do you like taking pictures of different views?

No grammatical error found; the sentence is correct as asked by the examiner, so no change is needed. (Note: This suggestion is included for completeness.)

× Do you prefer these important areas or jewelries?

✓ Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

The student used incorrect vocabulary: 'these important areas' and 'jewelries' do not match the meaning of 'urban areas' and 'rural areas'. 'Jewelry' is an uncountable noun and unrelated to types of views. Replace with 'views in urban areas or rural areas' to mirror the examiner's question and use correct nouns. Suggestion: Learn and use the collocation 'urban areas' and 'rural areas' and remember 'jewelry' is uncountable and unrelated in this context.

× Do you prefer views in your own country on in the countries?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

The student wrote 'on in the countries', which is both the wrong preposition and a wrong noun phrase. The correct contrast is 'in your own country or in other countries'. Use the preposition 'in' for countries and the conjunction 'or' for alternatives. Also use 'other countries' not 'the countries' to indicate countries besides your own. Suggestion: Use 'in' with country names and 'or' to present choices; practice 'my/your own country' vs 'other countries'.