视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答要更自然、语法更准确并且更简洁。第一句可把“recording every beautiful views”改为“recording every beautiful view”或“taking photos of beautiful scenery”。第二句不完整且有语法错误，应该补充完整的描述并给出具体细节（如拍摄的地点、时间或拍到的景物）。避免冗长重复，控制在最多五句话。可以使用连接词如“for example”之后加上具体信息。

示例: Yes, I love taking photos of interesting views when I travel. For example, when I visited Kyoto last spring I photographed temple gardens and colorful maple leaves, and I still look back at those shots to remember the trip.

建议: 回答需更准确用词并更连贯。不要说“a lot of landscape”，可用“many interesting sights”或“diverse urban scenes”。把“take more photos about skyscrapers and the wonderful landmark”改为更自然的表达，并给出一个原因或具体例子以丰富内容。使用连接词如“because”之后紧接原因。

示例: I prefer photographing urban areas because they offer diverse scenes like skyscrapers, street art and famous landmarks. For instance, in Shanghai I enjoyed capturing contrasts between modern towers and historic streets at sunset.

建议: 回答有语法和表达错误且含糊。应把“my own countries”改为“my own country”，并把“familiar with my country's control”改为清楚的原因，如“familiar with local places and customs”。“restricted to take photos to people”应改为“restricted from photographing people”并说明具体担忧或例子。尽量不使用模糊词，提供一两句具体理由。

示例: I prefer photographing in my own country because I'm familiar with local customs and know which places and people are okay to photograph. When I travel abroad I sometimes worry about privacy rules or cultural sensitivities that limit street photography.

× I love recording every beautiful views when I travel around the world.

✓ I love recording every beautiful view when I travel around the world.

本句中“every”后应接单数名词，不能用复数“views”。建议记住：every + 单数可数名词，用来强调“每一个”。可改为“every beautiful view”或去掉every改为“beautiful views”。

× For example, I remember that I went to Japan and then take so many wonderful.

✓ For example, I remember that I went to Japan and then took so many wonderful photos.

本句时态混用且缺少宾语。主句“I remember that I went to Japan”是过去时，被从句“then took”也应使用过去式“took”，而原句用现在式“take”。此外“wonderful”后缺少名词，需补“photos”。建议统一使用过去时，并确保动词后有宾语。

× I prefer to take photos in urban areas because they have a lot of landscape and I can take more photos about skyscrapers and the wonderful landmark.

✓ I prefer to take photos in urban areas because there are a lot of landscapes, and I can take more photos of skyscrapers and wonderful landmarks.

原句中“have a lot of landscape”用法不自然，应该用“There are a lot of landscapes”或“a lot of landscape”改为复数并用存在句；“photos about”是不正确的搭配，英语中应使用“photos of”来表示“关于…的照片”。另外“the wonderful landmark”若泛指应去掉定冠词或改为复数。建议使用“there are”结构或复数名词，并用“photos of”。

× Of course in my own countries, because I'm familiar with my country's control and I think in other countries I may be restricted to take photos to people.

✓ Of course in my own country, because I'm familiar with my country's rules and I think in other countries I may be restricted from taking photos of people.

本句存在复数/单数错误与词搭配错误。首先“my own countries”应为单数“my own country”。“country's control”表达不自然，改为“country's rules”或“laws”更恰当。后半句中“restricted to take photos to people”搭配错误，正确应该是“restricted from taking photos of people”或“not allowed to take photos of people”。注意介词和动词-ing形式的使用。