视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevap doğal ama dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. Mümkün olduğunca kısa, doğrudan ve düzgün cümle yapıları kullanın. Örneğin 'taking picture' yerine 'taking pictures' ve 'traveling different countries' yerine 'traveling to different countries' demelisiniz. Ayrıca bir konu cümlesi kurduktan sonra bir veya iki destekleyici detay verin; gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like photographing landscapes when I travel to different countries, because each place has unique scenery and light.

建议: Cümle akışı ve kelime kullanımı düzeltilmeli. 'Cities skyline' yerine 'city skylines' ve 'express me' yerine 'appeal to me' veya 'express my taste' gibi doğal ifadeler kullanın. 'Orban' gibi yazım hatalarını düzeltin ('rural'). Tek bir ana fikir verip ardından nedenini 1-2 destekleyici cümleyle bağlayıcı kelimelerle açıklayın.

示例: I prefer urban views because city skylines, lights and tall buildings appeal to me; they feel lively and modern. However, I also enjoy rural scenery for its peacefulness and natural beauty.

建议: Cümlelerinizde kelime seçimi ve dilbilgisi sorunları var ('contributes' yerine 'country', 'to picture it' yerine 'photograph it', 'It's relaxes me' yanlış yapıda). Bir ana fikir (her iki türü de sevdiğinizi) kurun, ardından kısa ve net sebepler verin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak akışı düzeltin.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and relaxing, and I love photographing them. At the same time, I enjoy views abroad because they offer new and stunning scenery, so I appreciate both.

× Well yes, I definitely like taking picture of different views, especially when I'm traveling different countries.

✓ Well yes, I definitely like taking pictures of different views, especially when I'm traveling to different countries.

You need the plural form 'pictures' (noun plural) and the preposition 'to' after 'traveling' when indicating destination. Use 'taking pictures' as the gerund phrase is correct; add 'to' to show movement to countries.

× I'm taking photos more often where I travel.

✓ I take photos more often when I travel.

Use the simple present 'I take' for habitual actions rather than present continuous 'I'm taking'. Also use 'when I travel' to indicate whenever you travel; 'where I travel' suggests places rather than occasions.

× I prefer urban views because cities skyline, city lights and tall buildings express me.

✓ I prefer urban views because city skylines, city lights and tall buildings express me.

Plural 'city skylines' matches 'cities' idea; 'skyline' should be 'skylines' or 'city skyline' as a singular. However, the verb 'express me' is unnatural; better 'express who I am' or 'appeal to me.' The correction keeps grammar (plural noun agreement) but consider 'appeal to me' for natural phrasing.

× But in the meantime, I also love Orban.

✓ But on the other hand, I also love urban areas.

'Orban' is a misspelling of 'urban' and needs a noun 'areas' for clarity. 'In the meantime' is incorrect here; 'on the other hand' contrasts preferences. Use correct adjective and phrase.

× I definitely love my own contributes.

✓ I definitely love my own country.

'Contributes' is wrong and likely a misspelling of 'country'. Use the noun 'country' and possessive 'my own' to indicate the speaker's country.

× I like to picture it and I like to see it with my own eyes.

✓ I like to photograph it and I like to see it with my own eyes.

'Picture' as a verb is informal; 'photograph' is clearer. The structure 'I like to...' is acceptable; keep parallel infinitives. No gerund change needed.

× It's relaxes me.

✓ It relaxes me.

Do not use 'it's' (it is) before another finite verb 'relaxes.' Use the single verb 'It relaxes me.'

× But other countries has absolutely gorgeous we used to so I love them both.

✓ But other countries are absolutely gorgeous, so I love them both.

Use plural verb 'are' with 'other countries.' The phrase 'we used to' is incorrect here; likely intended 'we're used to' or unnecessary. Removed 'we used to' to correct sentence meaning. Added comma before 'so.'