视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngữ pháp và từ vựng đúng hơn, kèm cấu trúc chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp (Yes, I do / No, I don’t), sau đó nối thêm lý do và ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh những lỗi như dùng thì sai, thiếu mạo từ và từ vựng không chính xác. Ví dụ chi tiết có thể là thời điểm chụp, thiết bị dùng hoặc cảm xúc khi chụp để làm câu tự nhiên hơn.

示例: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially when I travel, because I like capturing unique landscapes. For example, last month I took several pictures of a coastal sunrise with my smartphone, and the colors were stunning. I usually try to take photos during early morning or late afternoon when the light is best.

建议: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng (I prefer urban/rural views) rồi giải thích lý do cụ thể. Tránh lỗi phát âm/viết gây hiểu nhầm (ruler -> rural). Thêm ví dụ hoặc so sánh ngắn giữa hai loại khung cảnh để câu có chiều sâu hơn. Sử dụng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'because of' đúng chỗ và hoàn chỉnh câu để tránh mệnh đề rời rạc.

示例: I prefer rural views because the countryside offers peaceful landscapes and natural scenery that are great for photos. For instance, I enjoy photographing rice terraces and small villages, where the light and colors feel more natural. In contrast, urban views are busier and less relaxing for me.

建议: Câu trả lời cần cấu trúc rõ: đưa ra lựa chọn rồi giải thích nguyên nhân cụ thể và có ví dụ. Tránh dùng từ sai nghĩa (speaker, accumulate) và câu rời rạc. Nên nói về những điểm cụ thể bạn thích ở cảnh trong nước (ví dụ: văn hóa, thị trường, kiến trúc) hoặc so sánh với nước ngoài. Dùng liên từ để nối ý và giữ câu dưới 5 câu.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more familiar with the culture and local scenes, such as busy markets and traditional architecture. For example, I often photograph colorful street markets where vendors sell flowers and food, which show local life vividly. When I travel abroad, I still enjoy taking pictures, but I usually take more time to learn the best spots.

× Yes, I like I can taking picture on only.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures.

The original sentence has extra words and incorrect verb forms. Remove the redundant phrase 'I can' and use the gerund 'taking' with plural 'pictures' to match the meaning. Suggestion: use 'I like taking pictures' for a simple, correct statement.

× In trip and tan this is half a view.

✓ On trips and tours, I often see beautiful views.

The phrase 'In trip and tan' is unclear and uses incorrect prepositions and nouns; 'trip' should be plural 'trips', 'tan' is likely 'tour'. Use the preposition 'on' with 'trips' and 'tours'. Also 'this is half a view' is not natural; replace with a clear description such as 'I often see beautiful views.' Suggestion: say 'On trips and tours, I often see beautiful views.'.

× Very beautiful.

✓ They are very beautiful.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb. To be a complete sentence, add a subject like 'They' (referring to the views) and the verb 'are'. Suggestion: 'They are very beautiful.'.

× I like ruler.

✓ I prefer rural areas.

The student used 'ruler' incorrectly; the intended word is 'rural'. Also 'I like rural areas' or 'I prefer rural areas' fits the question. Suggestion: use 'rural' (adjective) not 'ruler' (a measuring tool or leader).

× I dress because in this I can take some photo.

✓ I prefer them because in rural areas I can take some photos.

'I dress' is incorrect; probably meant 'I like/desire' or 'I prefer them'. Use 'rural areas' as the subject and plural 'photos'. Also change preposition 'in this' to 'in rural areas' for clarity. Suggestion: 'I prefer them because in rural areas I can take some photos.'.

× I prefer view in my country speaker, I can take big time market accumulate.

✓ I prefer views in my country because I can photograph large markets and busy scenes.

This sentence has many unclear and incorrect phrases: 'speaker' is unrelated, 'big time market accumulate' is nonsensical. Clarify the meaning: likely they enjoy photographing markets and busy scenes in their country. Use plural 'views' and 'because' for reason. Suggestion: 'I prefer views in my country because I can photograph large markets and busy scenes.'.