视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, one or two specific supporting details, and correct verb forms. Avoid repetition and give a concrete example of a recent time you took photos. Use linking words like “for example” or “often” to make your response coherent.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, there is a beautiful park near my house where I often go at sunset to photograph the trees and river. I usually go with my friends and we take several photos to share on social media.

建议: Start with a clear direct answer, then give one or two specific reasons with a brief supporting example. Use past and present tenses accurately and avoid filler repetitions. Link ideas with words like “however,” “because,” or “also.”

示例: I prefer both urban and rural views for different reasons. Urban areas are exciting because of the architecture and lights, while rural areas are peaceful—when I was a child I loved waking up early in my village to watch the sunrise over the fields.

建议: Answer directly and give a clear reason with a specific example. Use correct tense and sentence structure, and avoid unclear references like “when I were showed.” Mention a particular city or scene you like and explain why it appeals to you.

示例: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing different cultures and famous landmarks. For example, I like photos of London with its historic buildings and riverside views; they look vibrant and different from the scenery in my hometown.

× Yes, obviously when I go to the different when I go to the different places such as in my near my house, the place is a very beautiful place.

✓ Yes, obviously when I go to different places near my house, the area is very beautiful.

This sentence has repeated fragments and awkward word order (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Remove repetition and place modifiers next to the noun they modify. Use 'different places near my house' instead of 'in my near my house' and replace 'the place is a very beautiful place' with 'the area is very beautiful' to avoid redundancy. Suggestion: Plan the sentence before speaking, avoid repeating phrases, and put location phrases immediately after the noun they describe.

× I love this place and every day I go, I wear everyday going there and we took pictures some took picture with my friends, my me and my friends and.

✓ I love this place and I go there every day. We take pictures with my friends.

Multiple issues: incorrect verb forms and tense inconsistency (Grammar Problem Type ID 10). 'I wear everyday going there' is ungrammatical; use 'I go there every day.' 'We took pictures' suggests past tense but context implies habitual action, so use present simple 'We take pictures.' Remove redundant fragments like 'some took picture' and 'my me and my friends.' Suggestion: For habitual actions use present simple (I go, we take). Keep sentences short and avoid inserting extra fragments.

× I think the I, I think I prefer both areas.

✓ I think I prefer both areas.

This sentence has a disfluency with a repeated phrase (Grammar Problem Type ID 6). Remove the repeated 'the I, I' to make a grammatically correct present-tense statement. Suggestion: Pause and then speak the intended phrase to avoid repetition.

× Both areas are very beautiful.

✓ Both areas are very beautiful.

This sentence is correct as written. No grammatical correction is needed, but ensure pronunciation and emphasis are clear when speaking.

× When I was child I went in my village areas.

✓ When I was a child I lived in a village.

The original has missing article and incorrect verb/preposition choice (Grammar Problem Type ID 5). Use 'a child' and 'lived in a village' rather than 'went in my village areas.' 'Went' is not appropriate for describing residence. Suggestion: Use 'when I was a child' + simple past for past states (was/lived).

× It is a very well and their views are very wonderful because when I wake up early in the morning, it was a very interesting views for me when I saw this.

✓ It was very nice and the views were wonderful. When I woke up early in the morning, the views were very interesting to me.

Multiple pronoun, tense and article errors (Grammar Problem Type ID 12). 'It is a very well' is wrong: 'well' is an adverb; use 'nice' or 'beautiful.' 'Their views' is unclear; use 'the views.' Tenses are inconsistent: mix of present 'wake' and past 'was'; use past 'woke' and 'were' to match 'when I was a child.' Also 'a very interesting views' mismatches article and plural noun; use 'very interesting to me.' Suggestion: Keep tense consistent within the time frame and match nouns with correct articles and plural forms.

× I prefer in other countries, the view is very well because when I, when I were showed the social me when I were, uh, show the social media in the like, uh, London City.

✓ I prefer views in other countries; the views look very nice because when I saw pictures on social media of places like London.

This sentence has incorrect verb forms and prepositions (Grammar Problem Type ID 9). 'Prefer in other countries' should be 'prefer views in other countries.' 'When I were showed' is wrong: use past simple 'when I saw' or passive 'when they were shown to me.' 'Show the social media' should be 'on social media' and 'showed' should be 'saw' or 'were shown.' Also 'London City' is better as 'London.' Suggestion: Use simple past 'saw' for completed actions; use correct prepositions like 'on social media.'

× London City is you are very well, very interesting When the when the London.

✓ London is very interesting.

The original is highly disfluent and contains incorrect structure and pronouns (Grammar Problem Type ID 2). Phrases like 'is you are very well' are ungrammatical. Simplify to 'London is very interesting.' Suggestion: Keep sentences simple: subject + verb + complement (London is interesting). Avoid inserting pronouns unnecessarily.