视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Give a direct, natural topic sentence and then one clear reason with a concise supporting detail. Avoid repetition and grammar errors; use correct verb forms and articles. For example, say 'No, I don't really like taking photos of views' and add one short reason using linking words such as 'because' or 'as'.

示例: No, I don't really like taking photos of views because holding a camera and finding the right angle makes me tired. For example, when I travel I prefer to relax and enjoy the scene rather than stop to take many pictures.

建议: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give two specific supporting reasons connected with linking words like 'because' and 'also'. Correct grammar (articles, plurals) and avoid repetition. For instance, 'I prefer rural areas because they are peaceful and less crowded.'

示例: I prefer views in rural areas because they are peaceful and there is much less noise. Also, the open landscapes and greenery help me relax more than busy city streets.

建议: Give one clear, grammatical topic sentence (e.g. 'I prefer views in other countries') and explain a specific reason with a concrete example. Avoid unclear phrases like 'make me abandoned' and use appropriate adjectives such as 'excited' or 'inspired'.

示例: I prefer views in other countries because seeing different cultures and landscapes excites me. For example, visiting a new country last year I loved exploring unfamiliar architecture and local markets, which felt inspiring and refreshing.

× No, I don't like a picture. Take a picture with the views because it's it's make me so tired and I don't like take a picture.

✓ No, I don't like taking pictures. Taking pictures of the views makes me very tired, and I don't like to take pictures.

Multiple article and verb form errors: 'a picture' is unnatural after 'like' when speaking generally; use the gerund 'taking pictures'. 'Take a picture with the views' should be rephrased to 'Taking pictures of the views'. 'It's it's make me' mixes contractions and wrong verb form; use 'makes' for third person singular subject 'taking pictures' (subject-verb agreement). 'I don't like take a picture' needs infinitive or gerund: 'I don't like to take pictures' or 'I don't like taking pictures'. Suggest using consistent gerund or infinitive and correct third-person singular verbs. Suggested focus: practice using gerunds after like/dislike when stating general preferences, and ensure subject-verb agreement for third-person singular verbs.

× I prefer for in rural areas because it's nice and no no loud, no loud noises and the no not so many people.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they are nice and not noisy; there are not so many people.

Errors with prepositions and word order: 'prefer for in rural areas' is incorrect; use 'prefer rural areas' or 'prefer to be in rural areas'. 'It's nice and no no loud, no loud noises' should be 'they are nice and not noisy.' Also 'the no not so many people' is incorrect; express as 'there are not so many people.' Suggest practicing correct collocations: 'prefer + noun/gerund' and using 'not noisy' or 'quiet' instead of awkward negation.

× I prefer it's own other countries because I like to go another countries. It's make it make me abandoned and. Perfect.

✓ I prefer other countries because I like to visit them. It makes me feel free and happy.

Pronoun and noun number errors: 'I prefer it's own other countries' misuses 'it's' and 'own'; use 'other countries.' 'I like to go another countries' mixes singular 'another' with plural 'countries'; use 'visit them' or 'travel to other countries.' 'It's make it make me abandoned' has wrong subject-verb agreement and word choice; 'It makes me feel free' or 'It makes me feel independent' is appropriate. Also 'abandoned' is incorrect in this context. Suggest practicing pronoun references ('them' for plural countries), subject-verb agreement (it makes), and choosing appropriate adjectives for feelings.