视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and irrelevant words. To improve, give a direct topic sentence (Yes/No and reason), use simple correct grammar, and provide one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Focus on vocabulary related to photography and scenery and avoid invented or unrelated words. Keep responses to no more than 4–5 sentences.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I like capturing atmosphere and color. For example, when I went trekking near a French cave and the nearby city, I photographed the contrast between dark rock formations and bright city lights. This combination made the photos more dramatic, so I try to look for strong contrasts when I shoot.

建议: Your answer is vague and uses incorrect words. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference (urban or rural) and give a specific reason. Use linking words like “because” or “for example,” and describe one concrete feature you like (cafes, architecture, nature trails). Keep sentences concise and grammatical.

示例: I prefer urban views because I enjoy modern architecture and lively streets. For example, I like walking along streets with interesting buildings and cozy cafés where there is always something new to see. This energy inspires me to take photos and explore different neighborhoods.

建议: The answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Clearly state whether you prefer local or foreign views and give specific reasons (convenience, familiarity, culture, landscapes). Use linking words such as “because” and provide one concrete example to support your opinion. Avoid repeated or irrelevant phrases.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because they are more familiar and convenient to visit. For example, I can easily travel to nearby mountains or historic towns on weekends, and I feel more connected to local customs and seasons. Because of that familiarity I often notice small details that make photos more meaningful.

× Nor I actually prefer trekking for the of French cave and city view because I enjoy gathering the atmosphere and color.

✓ No, I actually prefer trekking to see French caves and city views because I enjoy taking in the atmosphere and colors.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure issues: 'Nor I' is incorrect for disagreement (use 'No, I' or 'Actually, I'); 'preferring trekking for the of' is ungrammatical—use 'prefer trekking to see' or 'prefer to trek to see'; 'French cave and city view' should be plural or pluralized consistently ('French caves and city views'); 'gathering the atmosphere and color' uses incorrect verb and singular 'color'—use 'taking in the atmosphere and colors'. Suggestion: simplify the clause order and use correct verbs and plural nouns where appropriate. Grammar problem type's ID:26

× For instance, I opted for the grouse and scents and he tracks the vanitas.

✓ For instance, I choose places for their sounds and scents and to follow interesting trails.

This sentence contains unclear and incorrect word choices ('opted for the grouse' and 'he tracks the vanitas' are meaningless here) and poor structure. Replace faulty nouns with appropriate words: 'choose places for their sounds and scents' and 'follow interesting trails'. Maintain present tense to match general preference statements. Suggest using clear, concrete vocabulary and consistent tense. Grammar problem type's ID:26

× I prefer adventure because I enjoy modern articular and living states.

✓ I prefer adventurous places because I enjoy modern architecture and city life.

The original uses incorrect nouns ('adventure' vs 'adventurous places'), and unclear terms ('modern articular' and 'living states') that seem to be incorrect word choices. Replace with 'modern architecture' and 'city life' to convey likely intended meaning. Maintain noun forms that match the structure 'I enjoy X and Y'. Grammar problem type's ID:26

× For example, I like walking paths toward building cafe and marks guests whether it's always something interesting to see.

✓ For example, I like walking on paths past buildings and cafés; there is always something interesting to see.

Problems: incorrect preposition 'toward' with 'walking paths' (use 'walking on paths past' or 'walking along paths past'); missing articles and plural forms ('building cafe' should be 'buildings and cafés'); 'marks guests' is unclear and incorrect—replace with a clear clause such as 'there is always something interesting to see'. Suggest using correct prepositions ('on', 'past', 'along') and proper noun forms and articles. Grammar problem type's ID:11

× I actually I impresses my country over country more than in other country.

✓ Actually, I prefer my country to other countries.

Errors: repeated subject 'I actually I'; incorrect verb form 'impresses' (should be 'prefer' in this context) and wrong comparative structure ('my country over country more than in other country'). Use comparative pattern 'prefer A to B' and plural 'other countries'. Also remove the repeated subject. Suggest using 'prefer A to B' for comparisons. Grammar problem type's ID:12

× Each rain tickets are my country and our own country is convenient and interacting.

✓ Train tickets to travel within my country are affordable, and our country is convenient and welcoming.

Multiple issues: 'Each rain tickets' likely intended 'Train tickets' and wrong determiner 'Each' with plural 'tickets' (use 'Train tickets' or 'Train tickets to travel within my country'); subject-verb agreement ('are my country' is incorrect); 'convenient and interacting' uses wrong adjective 'interacting'—use 'welcoming' or 'interesting'. Suggest correcting nouns (train), determiners, and choose appropriate adjectives. Also ensure subject-verb agreement and clear sentence meaning. Grammar problem type's ID:22