视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, ngắn gọn theo cấu trúc: chủ đề + lí do + ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ, ngắt quãng bằng tiếng lắp (uh) và sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "have their unique characteristics"; "can only be seen"). Nên giới hạn trong tối đa 3-4 câu và dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "for example" để mạch lạc.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because each place has unique characteristics. For example, coastal towns often have colourful boats and soft light at sunset, while mountain villages feature dramatic peaks and misty mornings. These differences make photography more interesting and rewarding.

建议: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ ("in my opinion", "I think") quá nhiều. Sắp xếp câu theo cấu trúc: chủ đề (I prefer...) + lí do rõ ràng (three concise reasons) + một ví dụ ngắn. Chú ý ngữ pháp (singular/plural, verb agreement) và dùng liên từ như "because", "so", hoặc "for example" để kết nối ý.

示例: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter, cleaner, and more peaceful than cities. For example, I like walking through rice fields where I can enjoy fresh air and natural scenery without traffic noise.

建议: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lúng túng. Nên trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No + preference) và giải thích ngắn gọn với thông tin cụ thể (ví dụ những địa điểm nổi tiếng). Tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác ("units called Com"). Giữ tối đa 3 câu, dùng linking words như "because" hoặc "such as" để liệt kê ví dụ cụ thể.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because Vietnam has diverse landscapes and rich cultural sites. For example, Ha Long Bay’s limestone karsts and Hoi An’s historic streets are unique and visually striking, so I enjoy photographing them.

× Uh, yes, I like because imagine, I think that the different views and the different areas are always, uh, have their unique characteristic and the size they and the special size, which is only can see in, uh, this area.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures because I think different views and areas always have their unique characteristics and special features that you can only see in a particular area.

The original sentence has fragmented structure and redundant phrases causing confusion. Use a clear main clause: 'I like taking pictures because...' Ensure noun-verb agreement: 'views... have their unique characteristics' (plural nouns with plural verbs). Replace vague 'size' with 'features' or 'characteristics' and simplify 'which is only can see in this area' to 'that you can only see in a particular area'. Suggestions: remove filler words (uh, I think), combine related ideas into one sentence, and maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Uh, in my opinion, I think that I feel like the views in the rural areas more than the urban areas, because in my opinion, I think that the views and the environment in the, in the rural area is more free, more peaceful, and don't have so much pollution and some.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer views in rural areas to those in urban areas because the views and the environment in rural areas are freer, more peaceful, and have less pollution.

Multiple issues: incorrect comparison structure and preposition use. Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A more than B'. Use plural consistency: 'rural areas are' (not 'is'). Use 'have less pollution' instead of 'don't have so much pollution'. Also avoid repetition of 'in my opinion' and filler words. Suggestions: use 'prefer X to Y', match plural nouns with plural verbs, and use comparative adjectives properly.

× Uh, from my viewpoint, I think in my country, Vietnam is one of the most, uh, beautiful country in the world, which, uh, involves many special areas and some, uh, UNESCO, uh, and some units called Com.

✓ From my viewpoint, Vietnam is one of the most beautiful countries in the world; it has many special areas, including some UNESCO sites and other places called 'Com'.

Errors include article and countability: use 'countries' (plural) after 'one of the most' and do not repeat 'my country' and 'Vietnam' redundantly. Use 'has' rather than 'involves' for possession of sites. Clarify 'UNESCO sites' (common collocation) and place names. If 'Com' is a proper noun, put it as a name. Suggestions: use correct plural form after 'one of the', use standard collocations like 'UNESCO sites', and simplify sentence structure to state facts clearly.