视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Good idea but needs clearer structure, correct grammar, and more specific details. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Pay attention to verb forms (take/taking), singular/plural (picture/pictures), and word choice (sing/save). Keep answers concise (max 4–5 sentences).

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it makes me feel relaxed and refreshed. For example, I like photographing mountains at sunrise since the colours and light are beautiful. Also, taking photos helps me remember places I have visited and share them with friends.

建议: Answer is understandable but contains many mistakes and unclear words (e.g., 'rifle' should be 'rice fields' or 'farms', 'you' wrong pronoun). Use a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give specific reasons and one contrast sentence with linking words like 'however'. Correct grammar for singular/plural and verb agreement.

示例: I prefer views in rural areas because there are many rice fields and farms, which look peaceful and natural. However, I also enjoy urban views sometimes because the city lights and modern buildings are interesting to photograph.

建议: Main idea is clear but language needs polishing: use correct pronouns ('views in my country'), simpler phrases ('tourist places'), and more specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' correctly. Keep sentences concise and include an example of a place you would photograph.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because I want to promote the tourist places here to people abroad. For example, I would photograph Angkor temples to show their history and beauty. However, I would also like to photograph landscapes overseas to compare scenery and culture.

× Yes I do, I really enjoy taking picture from the different view because it make me feel fantastic and the will make me feel fresh and help me feel good after other thing and I can sing photo of the picture.

✓ Yes, I do. I really enjoy taking pictures of different views because they make me feel fantastic, and they make me feel refreshed and help me feel good after other things, and I can save photos of the pictures.

The student used 'taking picture' and 'different view' which require plural noun forms with the -ing verb 'taking' correctly used; this is a pluralization error (use 'pictures' and 'views'). Also 'sing photo' is incorrect verb choice; likely intended 'save photos'. Use 'they' to refer back to plural 'pictures' and 'views' and plural verb agreement 'make'. Use 'refreshed' (past participle/adjective) instead of 'fresh' in this context. Suggestion: pluralize nouns when referring to more than one item and ensure pronouns and verbs agree in number; choose correct verbs (save, take) for intended meaning.

× Yes I do, I really enjoy taking picture from the different view because it make me feel fantastic and the will make me feel fresh and help me feel good after other thing and I can sing photo of the picture.

✓ Yes, I do. I really enjoy taking pictures of different views because they make me feel fantastic, and they make me feel refreshed and help me feel good after other things, and I can save photos of the pictures.

The verb 'make' must agree with plural subject 'pictures' or 'views', so use 'they make' rather than 'it make' or 'the will make'. Also 'the will' is garbled; use 'they will' if future intended. Suggestion: identify the subject (singular/plural) and match verb forms accordingly.

× Yes I do, I really enjoy taking picture from the different view because it make me feel fantastic and the will make me feel fresh and help me feel good after other thing and I can sing photo of the picture.

✓ Yes, I do. I really enjoy taking pictures of different views because they make me feel fantastic, and they make me feel refreshed and help me feel good after other things, and I can save photos of the pictures.

Use 'taking pictures of' not 'taking picture from'; 'of' is the correct preposition to indicate what you are photographing. Also use 'after other things' not 'after other thing'. Suggestion: use 'of' with 'take a picture of' and ensure prepositions match the verbs.

× I prefer you in rural area because it have a lot of rifle or farm and everywhere look great.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they have a lot of rice fields or farms and everywhere looks great.

The student used 'you' instead of 'views' and wrong singular/plural forms: 'rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' when speaking generally, and 'it have' should be 'they have' to agree with plural. 'Rifle' is wrong word; likely 'rice fields'. 'Everywhere look' needs singular verb 'looks'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general preference and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× I prefer you in rural area because it have a lot of rifle or farm and everywhere look great.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they have a lot of rice fields or farms and everywhere looks great.

Using 'you' is incorrect pronoun for 'views'; use none or 'them' if referring to views. Also 'it' refers to singular but the context requires plural 'they'. Suggestion: refer back to the correct noun with matching pronoun and number.

× However, I also like the view in urban city because it have a more building and there are a lot of development.

✓ However, I also like the view in the city because it has more buildings and there is a lot of development.

Use 'more buildings' (plural noun) not 'a more building'. 'Urban city' is redundant; use 'the city' or 'urban areas'. 'There are a lot of development' should be 'there is a lot of development' (uncountable noun). Suggestion: avoid redundant adjectives, pluralize countable nouns, and use singular for uncountable nouns.

× However, I also like the view in urban city because it have a more building and there are a lot of development.

✓ However, I also like the view in the city because it has more buildings and there is a lot of development.

The verb 'have' must agree with singular subject 'it' -> 'has'. 'Buildings' is plural. 'There are' should be 'there is' with uncountable 'development'. Suggestion: check whether the subject is singular or plural and choose the correct verb form.

× I prefer you in my country because I want to show about the tourism place in my country to the world.

✓ I prefer views in my country because I want to show the tourist places in my country to the world.

'You' wrongly used instead of 'views'. 'Show about' is incorrect; use 'show' or 'talk about'. 'Tourism place' should be 'tourist places' or 'tourist attractions'. Suggestion: use correct pronouns and nouns for clarity.

× However, I also want to take the photo in the oversea to compare with my country too.

✓ However, I also want to take photos overseas to compare them with my country.

Use 'overseas' not 'in the oversea'. 'Take photos' plural is more natural. Use 'compare them with' or 'compare with'. Suggestion: use correct adverb 'overseas' and proper preposition 'compare with' and pluralize nouns when needed.