视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more natural and concise. Begin with a clear topic sentence answering the question, avoid repetition, correct word choice (views, not wheels), and provide one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep the response within 3–4 sentences.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. When I travel, I often photograph landscapes and cityscapes to capture memories, especially at sunrise when the light is best. For example, on my last trip I took photos of a coastal cliff that reminded me of the place for years.

建议: Answer directly with a clear preference or say it depends, then give specific comparisons. Avoid hesitations and pronunciation errors (vibes). Use linking words like however or although to contrast urban and rural views, and keep to 2–3 supporting sentences.

示例: It depends, but generally I prefer urban views for their energy and architecture. For instance, New York’s skyline and busy streets feel exciting, however I also appreciate rural views in England for their peaceful countryside and historic villages.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference then explain the reason with specific details. Use correct grammar (I have seen, not I seen) and avoid filler phrases like 'you know' and 'like'. Use linking words such as because or so.

示例: I prefer views in other countries because they feel more novel and exciting. I have visited many places in my own country, so foreign landscapes still surprise me and give me that ‘wow’ feeling when I see something new.

× Yes, I do like taking pictures of different wheels because I do travel.

✓ Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views because I travel.

The student used 'wheels' which is likely a wrong word choice, not a present participle error; however the main grammar issues are word choice and unnecessary auxiliary 'do' with 'travel'. Replace 'wheels' with 'views' to match the question and change 'I do travel' to simple present 'I travel' for general habitual action. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and avoid redundant 'do' unless for emphasis.

× I do like travel.

✓ I do like to travel.

After 'like' you should use the infinitive 'to travel' or the gerund 'traveling'. The student wrote 'I do like travel' which is ungrammatical. Use 'I do like to travel' (emphatic) or 'I like traveling' for natural expression.

× And when I travel, you know, I like taking pictures, capture the good memories and so on.

✓ And when I travel, you know, I like taking pictures to capture the good memories and so on.

The sentence mixes a gerund clause 'taking pictures' with a bare verb 'capture'. Use a to-infinitive ('to capture') to express purpose after 'taking pictures' or make both gerunds: 'I like taking pictures, capturing the good memories.' Maintain parallel structure.

× And yeah, I think it was a fun thing to do and.

✓ And yeah, I think it's a fun thing to do.

The student used past tense 'was' incorrectly and left the sentence incomplete. The context is habitual/present, so use present 'it's' and complete the idea. Avoid trailing conjunctions.

× Well, I think it depends if it's in, in the United States, I would prefer New York.

✓ Well, I think it depends: if it's in the United States, I would prefer New York.

Use a colon or conjunction to connect clauses; 'depends if' is colloquial but acceptable, better 'depends: if'. Also remove repeated filler 'in, in'. Ensure clear clause separation for readability.

× I like that kind of urban vipes And I I think it was cool.

✓ I like that kind of urban vibe, and I think it is cool.

'Vipes' is a misspelling; the correct noun is 'vibe'. Also fix capitalization, remove duplicate 'I', and match tense to present 'is' for general opinion.

× it was, it was a cool city, but I do think in some rural areas in England was nice as well.

✓ It is a cool city, but I do think some rural areas in England are nice as well.

The student mixed past and present. Since the statement is a general opinion, use present tense 'is' and 'are'. Also remove extra 'in' before 'England' and correct subject-verb agreement 'areas are'.

× Well, I prefer my views and other countries probably because, you know, I've seen it too much times, like I seen too many times and it doesn't have that like kind of wow like stunning feeling of it anymore.

✓ Well, I prefer views in other countries probably because, you know, I've seen them too many times; like, I've seen the sights too often, and they don't have that 'wow' or stunning feeling for me anymore.

Multiple issues: 'my views and other countries' is unclear — change to 'views in other countries'. 'I've seen it too much times' has pronoun-number and quantifier errors: use plural pronoun 'them' and 'too many times' or 'too often'. 'I seen' is nonstandard; use present perfect 'I've seen'. Also replace awkward phrasing 'that like kind of wow like stunning feeling of it' with concise 'that 'wow' or stunning feeling' and fix verb agreement 'they don't have'.