视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid filler words (umm, uh), correct noun choices, and give one or two brief specific reasons using linking words. Keep it under five sentences.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different scenes. For example, I often photograph parks and cityscapes because each place has a unique atmosphere. Also, taking photos helps me remember details of places I visit.

建议: Answer directly, reduce repetition and fillers, and give specific supporting details with linking words. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'rural areas are' not 'is'), and one clear example should suffice.

示例: I prefer rural views because they are greener and more peaceful than cities. For instance, mountain landscapes with forests and streams feel relaxing and offer great photo opportunities.

建议: Give a direct opinion, avoid fillers, and explain reasons with specific examples. Correct grammar (e.g., 'in other countries' and 'I see every day'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to structure the response.

示例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different landscapes and cultures I haven't seen before. For example, seeing distinct architecture or coastal scenery abroad makes travel more exciting and memorable.

× I like to take taking different pictures of different frills because I think, umm, every wheels have umm, their special and I think, uh to taking the fields can let me more, uh, remember more.

✓ I like to take different pictures of different places because I think every place has its own special qualities, and taking photos of the places helps me remember them more.

The original uses 'to take taking' which mixes infinitive and -ing forms; this is incorrect. Use either 'to take' or 'taking' but here 'to take' fits the pattern 'I like to...'. Also 'frills' seems wrong in context; 'places' is appropriate. 'Fields' was used awkwardly; 'places' or 'locations' is clearer. Replace 'can let me more remember more' with 'helps me remember them more' for natural structure and correct verb usage. Suggestions: choose either 'I like to take...' or 'I like taking...'; avoid doubling verb forms.

× I like to take taking different pictures of different frills because I think, umm, every wheels have umm, their special and I think, uh to taking the fields can let me more, uh, remember more.

✓ I like to take different pictures of different places because I think every place has its own special qualities, and taking photos of the places helps me remember them more.

'Every wheels have' mixes singular 'every' with plural 'wheels' and plural verb 'have'. After 'every' use a singular noun and singular verb: 'every wheel has' or better 'every place has'. Also 'their' should agree with singular antecedent; use 'its' if keeping singular (every place has its...). Suggestions: when using 'every', follow with singular noun and singular verb.

× Umm, I prefer views in rural areas because I think umm in the views in the rural area is more, uh, green and comfortable.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I think the scenery in rural areas is greener and more comfortable.

The phrase 'in the views in the rural area is more green' misuses prepositions and articles. Use 'the scenery in rural areas' or 'views in rural areas' and compare using comparative adjective 'greener'. 'More comfortable' is needed instead of 'comfortable' to compare. Suggestions: use 'scenery in rural areas' and comparative adjectives when comparing.

× Umm, I prefer views in your own country or in other countries? Umm, I prefer views on other country because umm, the views on my country I can see every days it is not umm uh, special anymore, but the other countries uh has different fields that I can see more.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I can see the views in my country every day, so they are not special anymore, but other countries have different landscapes that I can see.

'On other country' and 'on my country' wrongly use 'on' instead of 'in' and misuse articles. Use 'in other countries' and 'in my country'. 'Every days' is incorrect pluralization; use 'every day'. 'Has different fields' has subject-verb agreement issue; 'other countries have'. Also 'fields' is awkward; 'landscapes' or 'sights' is better. Suggestions: use correct prepositions 'in' for countries, 'every day' for each day, and ensure plural subjects take plural verbs.

× I prefer views on other country because umm, the views on my country I can see every days it is not umm uh, special anymore, but the other countries uh has different fields that I can see more.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I can see the views in my country every day, so they are not special anymore, but other countries have different landscapes that I can see.

The clause 'the other countries uh has' shows subject-verb disagreement: 'countries' is plural and requires 'have', not 'has'. Also 'the views on my country I can see every days it is not special' contains multiple grammar issues (preposition, 'every day', and 'they are not special'). Suggestions: match plural subjects with plural verbs and separate ideas into clearer clauses.