视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cần nói rõ, mạch lạc và đúng ngữ pháp; tránh lặp từ và lỗi phát âm/viết; dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, kèm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể, có liên kết logic. Ví dụ: bắt đầu bằng câu trả lời trực tiếp (‘Yes, I do.’), sau đó giải thích lý do với liên từ (‘because’, ‘for example’), và mô tả một ví dụ cụ thể (where, what, when). Hạn chế dài hơn 3-4 câu và sửa lỗi danh từ/từ vựng như ‘views/landscapes’, ‘at the zoo’, ‘lions and tigers’.

示例: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking pictures of landscapes because they are relaxing and beautiful. For example, when I visit the zoo I often take photos near the cafe area where I can capture lions and tigers in a natural setting. I find these images remind me of peaceful moments after a busy day.

建议: Cần câu trả lời rõ ràng và dùng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ ‘rural areas’ not ‘land cave’); dùng liên từ để liên kết lý do (‘because’, ‘so’) và cung cấp một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể về lý do bạn thích vùng nông thôn (yên tĩnh, phong cảnh). Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như ‘it's sweet’; thay bằng ‘it’s peaceful’ hoặc ‘it’s refreshing’. Giữ dưới 4 câu.

示例: I prefer views in rural areas because they are usually quieter and more relaxing. For instance, I like walking by green fields and small rivers, which helps me unwind after a long day of studying. The fresh air and open space make it much more pleasant than busy city streets.

建议: Cần câu trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và nói rõ lý do cụ thể; sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ ‘people who work’, ‘I prefer views in my own country’). Nên đưa ra so sánh ngắn gọn giữa hai loại cảnh và một ví dụ cụ thể cho mỗi bên. Tránh lặp ‘beautiful’ và dùng từ vựng phong phú hơn (e.g., ‘charming’, ‘historic’).

示例: I prefer views in my own country because I enjoy watching local people at work and the familiar atmosphere. However, I also appreciate views in other countries, such as England, where historic buildings and charming streets offer a very different kind of beauty.

× Yes, I take I like taking a picture of different view because I like seeing landscape.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I like seeing landscapes.

The sentence contains errors with plural nouns and redundant verbs. 'Taking a picture of different view' should be 'taking pictures of different views' to match plural form for general preference. 'I take I like' has an extra 'I take' which is unnecessary. 'Seeing landscape' should be 'seeing landscapes' to use plural for general reference. Suggestion: Remove the extra 'I take', use 'taking pictures' and pluralize 'views' and 'landscapes'.

× For example, when I go to the zoo, I really like England Cafe, so I often take picture in here.

✓ For example, when I go to the zoo, I really like England Cafe, so I often take pictures here.

Preposition and article usage errors: 'take picture in here' is incorrect. Use plural 'take pictures' for habitual action and 'here' without 'in' is correct: 'take pictures here'. Also no article before 'picture' when plural. Suggestion: Use 'take pictures here' for clarity and correct preposition usage.

× I often take a picture about anymore set out Lion tiger.

✓ I often take pictures of the lions and tigers on display.

This sentence has multiple issues: wrong preposition 'about', incorrect phrase 'anymore set out', missing articles and pluralization. Use 'take pictures of' to indicate the object photographed, pluralize 'lions and tigers', and 'on display' to indicate animals presented in the zoo. Suggestion: Rephrase to a clear structure: 'I often take pictures of the lions and tigers on display.'

× I think I prefer view in rural area than open area because I like seeing land cave because it is very peaceful and it's sweet for me after a long day of studying or hardworking.

✓ I think I prefer views in rural areas to those in urban areas because I like seeing the countryside; it is very peaceful and pleasant for me after a long day of studying or hard work.

Multiple errors: wrong prepositions and singular/plural forms. Use 'views in rural areas' (plural) and compare 'to those in urban areas' rather than 'than open area'. 'Land cave' is incorrect; likely meant 'countryside'. 'Sweet' is inappropriate; use 'pleasant'. 'Hardworking' should be noun phrase 'hard work'. Suggestion: Use 'prefer X to Y', pluralize nouns when speaking generally, and choose appropriate vocabulary ('countryside', 'pleasant', 'hard work').

× I think I prefer view in my country because I like, I like watching people who working for my country.

✓ I think I prefer views in my country because I like watching people who work for my country.

Errors: 'view' should be plural 'views' when speaking generally. 'Who working' lacks the auxiliary verb; use 'who work' for present simple. Suggestion: Use plural for general preferences and ensure verbs after relative pronouns have correct tense and subject-verb agreement.

× Sometime I also like watching, uh, other countries like England, because it's very beautiful and beautiful.

✓ Sometimes I also like looking at other countries, like England, because they are very beautiful.

Problems: 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' (adverb). 'Watching other countries' is unnatural; use 'looking at' or 'visiting'. 'It's very beautiful and beautiful' is repetitive and 'it's' refers to a country (singular) but speaking of 'other countries' use plural 'they are'. Suggestion: Use 'Sometimes', avoid repetition, and match subject and verb number ('they are').