视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammar and fluency: use correct verb forms and natural collocations (e.g., "I like taking photos of different views"). Keep answers concise with a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (e.g., "especially", "for example") correctly and avoid repetition.

示例: I do enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I go out I often photograph flowers and interesting buildings because their colours and shapes catch my eye.

建议: Correct word choice and reduce repetition: replace "prepare" with "prefer" and avoid repeating words. Start with a clear preference, then give two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "also"). Provide concrete sensory details to be more vivid.

示例: I prefer rural views because of the trees, mountains and wide green fields, which feel very refreshing. Also, rural areas often have rivers and wildlife, so there is more natural variety to photograph.

建议: Fix major grammar and clarity issues: use correct verbs and articles (e.g., "I prefer views in other countries"). Make one clear statement of preference, then explain with specific examples and correct vocabulary (e.g., "snow", "mountains"). Avoid vague phrases like "so unlikely" and ensure sentences are coherent.

示例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer landscapes we don't have at home. For instance, I would love to see snow-covered mountains and varied terrain that provide new photo opportunities.

× Yes, I like take.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures.

The verb 'like' should be followed by a gerund when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Replace the base verb 'take' with the gerund 'taking' and include the object 'pictures' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'like taking' or 'enjoy taking'.

× I like taking pictures of the purview.

✓ I like taking pictures of the view.

'Purview' is incorrect in this context; the correct noun is 'view'. Use 'view' to mean a scene or landscape. Also keep the gerund phrase 'taking pictures of the view'.

× Yes, especially when going out when I saw all nice flower and building or anything that catches my eye.

✓ Yes, especially when I go out and see nice flowers, buildings, or anything that catches my eye.

Tense and structure are mixed. Use present simple 'go out' and 'see' to match habitual action. 'Flower' and 'building' should be plural ('flowers', 'buildings'). Use conjunction 'and' to join clauses and commas to separate items. Suggestion: keep consistent tense and plural nouns for countable items.

× I prepare the rural areas because of the trees, mountains and lots of green, green green seeds and it's refreshing.

✓ I prefer rural areas because of the trees, mountains, lots of greenery, and because it's refreshing.

'Prepare' is incorrect; the intended verb is 'prefer' (to like one option more). 'Green, green green seeds' is unclear; use 'greenery' or 'lots of green' to express vegetation. Keep parallel structure and connect reasons with 'because'.

× And they have they have rivers too and different animals.

✓ They also have rivers and various animals.

Redundant repetition 'they have they have' should be removed. 'Different animals' is better expressed as 'various animals'. Use 'also' for addition and ensure concise phrasing.

× I prepare bills in another countries I have so unlikely.

✓ I prefer places in other countries; I haven't been there, though.

Many issues: 'prepare bills' is incorrect — likely 'prefer places' or 'prefer to visit places'. 'Another countries' should be 'other countries' (plural). 'I have so unlikely' is ungrammatical; if meaning 'I am unlikely to have visited' or 'I haven't been there' use 'I haven't been there' or 'I am unlikely to visit'. Clarify intended meaning; here corrected to express preference and lack of experience.

× I have great mountains, nice views and they have snows and a lot of different views that we don't have in our country.

✓ They have great mountains, nice views, snow, and many different sights that we don't have in our country.

Avoid repeating subjects incorrectly. Use 'They have' once to list features. 'Snows' is uncountable as 'snow'. 'A lot of different views' is better as 'many different sights'. Ensure subject-verb consistency and correct noun forms.