视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and clear with a topic sentence, correct grammar, and concise supporting details. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and avoid unclear phrases. Mention why you prefer watching rather than photographing and give a brief example or result. Keep it to 2–4 sentences.

示例: I enjoy taking photos of views, but not very often because I prefer to experience the scene with my eyes. For example, when I visit a seaside cliff, I like to sit and watch the waves for a while, so I feel more relaxed than rushing to take many pictures.

建议: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar and avoid vague or incorrect words (e.g., 'you go', 'pitch'). Mention concrete details—sounds, sights, atmosphere—and limit to 2–4 sentences.

示例: I prefer views in urban areas, especially near my local pagoda in Hanoi, because the mix of traditional architecture and city life is very appealing. For instance, the Vạn Đàn Pagoda near my home has ornate roofs and the sound of bells, which makes the place feel warm and peaceful.

建议: Give a clear, grammatically correct answer stating your preference and reason. If you haven't traveled abroad, say so smoothly and express your desire with a short reason. Avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases and keep it to 2 sentences.

示例: I haven't traveled to other countries yet, so I usually prefer views in my own country for now. However, I would love to see views in Italy in the future because I admire its historic cities and coastal landscapes.

× I like taking picture of different view but not really too much.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views, but not too much.

The nouns 'picture' and 'view' should be plural because they refer to general, countable things in plural. Use 'pictures' and 'views'. Also add a comma before the contrast 'but'. Suggestion: when referring generally to multiple items use plural nouns (pictures, views).

× I want to spend my time and my eyes to watch this view.

✓ I want to spend my time watching the view.

After 'spend (time)' we use the gerund form of the verb ('watching'), not an infinitive. 'My eyes' is unnecessary and awkward; native speakers say 'watching the view'. Suggestion: use 'spend time' + verb-ing and omit redundant nouns.

× I think it's you.

✓ I think it's beautiful.

The sentence 'I think it's you' is unclear and likely incorrect in context; the student probably intended to express an opinion about the view. This is a sentence structure/content error rather than grammar alone. Replacing with 'I think it's beautiful' matches the context. Suggestion: ensure pronouns refer clearly to people or things; use an adjective to describe the view.

× It's my opinion is I really like in this place.

✓ In my opinion, I really like this place.

This sentence contains redundant and incorrect structure: 'It's my opinion is' mixes two forms. Use either 'My opinion is that...' or 'In my opinion, ...'. 'Like in this place' is incorrect; say 'like this place'. Suggestion: use 'In my opinion' or 'My opinion is that' followed by a clause.

× Uh, in Hanoi city, I prefer you go to Vadian Pagoda.

✓ In Hanoi city, I prefer you to go to Vạn Đàu Pagoda. OR In Hanoi city, I prefer going to Vạn Đàu Pagoda.

The structure 'I prefer you go' is ungrammatical. After 'prefer' when referring to another person's action use 'prefer someone to do something' (I prefer you to go) or use the gerund 'prefer going'. Also the pagoda name may need correct spelling. Suggestion: use 'I prefer you to go to...' or 'I prefer going to...'. Ensure proper noun spelling.

× Uh, I near where I stay near in this pagoda and I feel really so warm, so pitch and very traditional.

✓ It's near where I live, and I feel very warm, peaceful and that it is very traditional.

Prepositions and word order are incorrect: 'I near where I stay near in this pagoda' is ungrammatical. Use 'It's near where I live' or 'It is near my home'. 'Pitch' is wrong word choice; perhaps 'peaceful' or 'quiet' fits. 'Really so warm, so pitch' mixes intensifiers improperly; use 'very warm and peaceful'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions 'near my home' and choose appropriate adjectives ('peaceful', 'quiet').

× I didn't travel other countries, yes, but I really want to go to Italia.

✓ I haven't traveled to other countries yet, but I really want to go to Italy.

Use present perfect 'haven't traveled' to express lack of experience up to now rather than simple past 'didn't travel'. Also use 'to' with 'travel' when indicating destination: 'travel to other countries'. 'Italia' should be 'Italy' in English. The word 'yes' and punctuation are awkward; 'yet' fits. Suggestion: use present perfect for life experience and correct country name 'Italy'.

× I like no friends.

✓ I don't have any friends there.

'I like no friends' is ungrammatical. To express absence use negative auxiliary + 'any': 'I don't have any friends.' Context suggests 'there' refers to Italy, so add 'there'. Suggestion: use 'I don't have any friends (there)' to indicate no friends in that place.

× Sorry I liar FN I and I want to stay in that.

✓ Sorry, I lied. I want to stay there.

This sentence is confused. 'I liar' is incorrect; use 'I lied' (past tense of 'lie' meaning not telling the truth). 'FN' seems extraneous and should be removed. 'I want to stay in that' should be 'I want to stay there' or 'I want to stay in Italy.' Suggestion: use clear past tense 'I lied' for admitting an untruth, and use 'there' or the place name to indicate location.